Bab 5: Express
"Alice? Are you alright?" Carlisle asked.
"I think so?" Alice said before figuring out how to live as a non stone like being again.
"You're still evolving. It's like you're moving up the vampires tier ladder. If this continues you will be like Vlad in some worlds. Progenitor level vampire with no weaknesses." I said thoughtfully.
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"So now what?" Alice asked me since she graduated early to spend more time with me.
"How about we use an ability I haven't told you about yet?" I asked mysteriously.
"What ability have you been hiding from me?" Alice asked with a pout.
"Wanna visit another world? Any world you can think of. We will gain a bloodline from that world to help us fit in. Naruto would give a bloodline we choose so we have Chakra and a background, for example. Time here will stop so no time will pass even if we're gone for 100 years." I said.
"Any world? How about Harry Potter? While I do want to help Naruto, I'd like to help Harry out in AT LEAST 1 world. And to be honest, I want magic!" Alice said excitedly.
"Alright, let's go." I said as I wrapped my arms around Alice and we disappeared through a portal and the world went monochrome.
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Opening my eyes I realized we were standing in front of M again.
"Hello Grandfather." I said with a polite nod of my head.
"Lucian. We can deal with introductions after I deal with your "transfer" to the HP world you're going to. First, depending on how you want to do this, you can go as you are with a backstory already in place or you can even be 11 about to attend Hogwarts or anything else you can think of." M stated calmly.
"...honestly, I'd like to be Harry's older twin brother. Protecting him from the Dursleys from a young age so he isn't so beaten and bruised, malnourished and short. No change to my looks, but younger I guess. Peverell heirship is mine while the Potter heirship is Harry's. Gryffindor is mine while Slytherin is Harry's through conquest. Black is mine through blood as the oldest. Alice, what do you want? Anything you can think of, I just ask you don't take over the body of another. I want you to look the same please." I said.
"Luna is my younger sister by 1 year and I'm fine with taking on the silvery hair if that's not an issue?" She said while looking at me questioningly. After I nod she continues "Hufflepuff heiressship is Luna's along with Ravenclaw being mine. That should give us full control over Hogwarts so Dumblecunt can't force his choices on us. The Lovegood line is the confirmed line of Morgana and the Peverell line is the confirmed line of both Pendragon and Merlin. I love the perks the fanfics I've read give with those. Staffs are accepted foci in this world but almost nobody needs it, I only say this because I want trainers that know how to use them there to teach us how to use them AND swords, shields, etc etc. I want the training for other worlds." Alice said in 1 long breath.
"The weapon training can be done in another world so you don't just show up as a 7 year old with full knowledge on how to wield a weapon you've never held before, like the Naruto or Bleach worlds. Staffs will be a requirement for both of you anyways but I'll leave a way for you to have a teacher without changing the story. The bloodlines are difficult but not impossible for you to have so long as you decided, as the oldest of your generation, to give the hereditary lines to your younger siblings willingly, otherwise the heirships go to the oldest automatically. There are a few more things to discuss..." M said as we continued our conversation.
(Left open for anything i forgot or want to add later, lol)
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Opening my eyes, I realized I was sitting in a cupboard but my cat like purple eyes now gave me night vision, even in total darkness. Looking over I saw my twin baby brother, snuggled into me, staring back at me with his AK green eyes, but with 4 big differences. His eyes were cat like, he wore no glasses, his hair was set in a way to always cover his scar, years of me training it and his hair was as white as mine. I guess he got some things from me in all this.
"Good morning Harry. Ready for a new day?" I asked as I rubbed his head.
"As I'll ever be, Lucian. Happy birthday." Harry said with a small smile.
"Happy birthday Harry. Today, everything changes. I promise." I said just before stomping feet came down the stairs.
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"You're wizards, Harry and Lucian!" Hagrid said.
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"Welcome to Diagon Alley!" Tom, the barkeep, said.
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At Gringots after a blood test "You boys, together, own half of Hogwarts, most of Great Britain, and are actually owed so much in back payments from the Wizarding world, it would go beyond bankrupt if you decided to go after them for it. Many of your family artifacts are also in the possession of others that we will begin to repossess for you, free of charge. Technically, you own Gringotts as well. Not only the lands we rent, and still make our payments on I might add, but your ancestors actually funded the start of it all." Ragnok said. "We can drop the rent so long as we keep our status as the owners and you keep helping us." I said with Harry nodding along with me. "I must confirm it with my king, but I'm still thankful Mister Peverell and Mister Potter." Ragnok said with a bow. "If he accepts, I shall ask to name you both Goblin Friend!"
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"The foci chooses the wizard, boys. I'll be expecting great things from the both of you!" Olivander said before we walked out the door of the wand shop.
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"Over here Harry. This is the way to the train. After we can grab an empty compartment." I told Harry as we walked through the station alone. No Weasel interactions here.
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After getting set in our lone compartment we released our owls and sat down to read our course books in silence until the train left. Immediately afterwards the door opened to a young silver haired girl I'd recognize anywhere.
"Alice! I missed you." I said as she threw herself into my arms.
After our introductions the door was thrown open by a red haired boy saying the other compartments were full but my bench was full with Alice and me while Harry's had 3 owls taking up the rest of his.
"We're full too mate. Keep looking." I said not unkindly.
"Move the owls, I can fit." He said as he tried to force his way in.
"No!" I said as we all stood up to make sure he didn't harm our companions. Even the owls puffed up, ready to attack.
"Whats your problem? They're just owls! I'm supposed to be Harry's best friend and everyone on the train is saying Harry is in this compartment!" Ron yelled in my face.
"My problem is a certain red head trying to force his way into my compartment, threatening my owls and telling me what he's going to do, concerning my twin baby brother!" I said back.
"Twin?! Harry Potter doesn't have a twin!" Ron said.
"Says who?!" Harry yelled.
"Everyone. Harry Potter is a lone orphan child that has nobody." Ron said.
"I'm pretty sure I know who my twin brother is." Harry said, not backing down.
"You look nothing like each other. Except those scary eyes and white hair." Ron said.
"You don't think all twins are identical, do you?" I asked.
"Of course they are!" Ron said, not realizing 2 sets of twins had arrived outside the still open door. "My brothers are twins and you can't even tell them apart!" Ron said proudly.
"OH really? We're the Patil twins and we aren't identical. Are you saying WE aren't twins?" Padma asked.
"What? Yes...No...But..." Ron tried to defend himself.
"Enough, Ron. Come with us! We apologize for our idiot younger brother. We will educate him immediately. " The red haired twins said to both the white and black haired twins as they grabbed him and his stuff before gently closing the door and disappearing down the hall.
After sitting down Harry asks "Now what?"
"Now, we wait til we arrive at the station." I said as I leaned back with Alice in my arms and Harry happily going back to his book.
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A bit of a speed read but 1500 words. I'll be honest, I kinda like this way of writing. The long drawn out books are fun to read but beyond me for writing. I'm sure I can do more on certain scenes but this is probably how I'm going to do it from now on and it will allow me to write more. Let me know below.
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