My Uncle's Store In Apocalypse (Dropped)

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Tonyorobsky

A work inspired from I Have A Mansion In The Post Apocalyptic World, and other world commuting + trading stories. Writing, updates and plot are OK. The characters design and the world background are lacking. -No one of the main and secondary characters has been properly introduced. We don’t even have an idea of what they look like. Even the places lack descriptions. -The story went straight to the uncle making him a shop keeper in an alternate world. No big reactions about that as well. It feels like it’s just an oddity for the protagonist. -And once more we have a stupid protagonist that doesn’t make proper preparations before leaving the security of his place and venturing into a dangerous world. Just a few days after the attack of a VERY DANGEROUS and TENACIOUS monster. No proper shooting training or self defense training, when there was a f*cking GANG WAR (thus possibly evil and greedy people) in his neighborhood (close to his shop) the previous day!

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madskie00017

So far, I am impressed with the story and its plot. The flow of every chapter got me hooked. It has so much potential. Keep writing please!

LV 15

Julian

Ich kommentiere selten einen Roman aber in diesem Fall muss ich es tun Bin derzeit bei cap.46 und habe in einem rutsch durchgelesen. Der Aufbau gefällt mir es gib keine Verzögerungen in der Geschichte der Charakter bleibt stabil und ist weder pervers noch geistig zurückgeblieben. Meiner Meinung hat dieser Roman Potenzial und werde ihn weiterverfolgen.

LV 10

FrozenKing

As there is only 4 chapter atm not much to comment on but, as stated in synopsis that hes uses grammerly it is still readable with a mistake here and there. I love these type of stories so high points atm and hope author keeps it up

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Chuck45Single

The idea behind the story is very unique, I've never read a book with a plot similar to this one! It's obvious how much the author cares about their story and the writing is pretty good. I just wished the main character had a little bit more depth. Keep up the good work!

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chayasreedeka

Hey I read a few chapters but I know it is a good book...well done author...keep up d good work...recommended n stored in my library to read further;)

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koladeizdavid

This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️

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MrE

Great Novel Read read read Hdhdhsnshdbdjdndndjxbxjdhndjsjdbdhcbdjdbdndndhxjdjdndndndnjdjdndjdjdndndndhndndbdbdjdjdhdjdjdndndjxbfjdndjdndjdj

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yungsern87

Giving out a positive review for an interesting writer. For those enjoying the story MCV in Doomsday, Mansion in Apocalypse, this is quite a good one to try. Won't complain about the style but keep it up. Make it to the end, author!

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hartpeler

i dont have much comment about this work, but all i can say. if you are a person who about to inherit something on your family. then dont worry, you are on the same boat with me. this work is definelly has a big potential :D

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striker45

It's good will give full review after more chapters are there to read...................... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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GreenNight

It´s good....................... ............................................................................. .......................................................................... ........................................................................ .............................

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Baldwin

This is one of the few books i have read that I could say well done 👍. This is amazing reach in imagination and words. Please don’t make it a harem. It will be just like any other then. This is amazing keep up the good work🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌

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iiTzHal

A very funny read to simply kick back on and enjoy! Despite a couple errors, this novel still manages to keep me hooked. I love the humour, and the story progresses at a steady pace as well. Definitely something you don't want to miss!

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PuddingMaster

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wild_imaginatorII

The title of this book made me curious so I decided to read the blurb. When I read the blurb I knew I had to proceed to read the book. I read chapter one, which was really nice but I noticed that there were a few problems with tenses (I know you used grammerly but that app can be a bit of an ass sometimes) so I suggest you self edit if you can't get an editor to help with that. Above all, the book is nice, keep it up!

LV 4

Hocolate

well I can't give too high a review, because the story line is still flat and few. Let's wait in a few months, hopefully getting a 5 star. updates are still slow #sad