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My System's Useless in the Shinobi World

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Thy, the Primordial Daoist Ancestor, Embodiment of all Daos, has produced a new daibolical art tracing to the anals of chaos.
For all Daoist who seek Enlightenment and a great adventure.
As we follow the journey of a unfortunate soul that is plunged into countless problems as he dies.

When normal souls enjoy rest, he enjoys....errr... misfortune.

..............

Beta."Gahhh another shitty Naruto fanfic. I'm tired of this shit.

Author:" You dare insult this Ancestor, junior?"

Beta:" Shut up, just another old man that has exceeded his expiry date"

Author" (flies into rage) Your courting death

Beta:" What? Prove me wrong, isn't just a bitch who got into Naruto world and secretly amass power so he could fuck Kaguya?"

Author:"....."???

Beta:" You see."

Author:" Just try it, trust this senior it's actually good"

Beta:" Shut up... fraudulent cunning shit"

Author:* Looses his patience and erases Beta *" Hakai.....it's like some people have forgotten who I am!!!"

..............

Chad: ( who saw the erasure of his friend) " Oh! Honourable Ancestor. this humble soul is already enlightened In the midst of your presence. Please guide this soul in this forbidden scripture."

Author:" Oooh an interesting Junior"
(waves his sleave) Take my blessings young one

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Reiya9

Mc is emotionless, nerfed by the worlds will, abused by higher beings, branded with a tongue curse seal, and byakugan curse seal. Holy shit this is garbage and it’s barely 8 chapters in

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Rak
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This is a great work. Dont go by synopsis, its very bad. this is less cultivation in naruto world and more of a mad scientist god in multiverse. It takes freaking 10 chapters to setup and main story starts after that. im not sure if its a translation, cuz if so please give raw.

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CaioBR

A really interesting novel, it has great world building and looks promising. (I don't know how to write reviews and I don't speak English.)

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Immortal_Sakura

This Sacred novel is simply divine, im especially taken aback with the uchiha plot. you have going on, have not seen it written like that before. This young one wishes to know if this is your original or if it is a translation. If it is indeed translation would you be kind enough to share the original Raw name with this junior.

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