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My new life in One Piece
4.05 (63 peringkat)
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"You want my treasure? You can have it! I left everything I gathered together in one place. Now you'll just have to find it!"
Those were the words that changed the life of our protagonist who was in a prison, his sick body. But he got consolation in death, or so he thought, when he found himself inside the world of his fantasies.
Follow our protagonist in his new life in the world that he knows so well and for which he will follow his principles and ideals to achieve his goal, but he will not become a pirate, but he chose the path of justice, the navy.
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Both the world and the One Piece characters do not belong to me and I only use them to make this story.
English is not my native language and I clarify that there will be grammatical errors throughout the novel, if someone likes this story and is encouraged to volunteer to work as a translator, I welcome anyone with open arms. (the translation is from Spanish to English)
IMPORTANT TO READ THE CHAPTER OF "CLARIFICATIONS" BEFORE STARTING THE HISTORY.
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For those that want to read this. Consider this a warning, just some random things that tick me off. -Instead of devil fruit author says fruit of the devil -instead of logia fruit author says loggia or lodge -its a logia fruit based mc -its a water logia LOLOLOL
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Being completely honest about the novel, I think it has a lot of potential, however that potential is completely ruined by the fact that it's completely unreadable. I have no idea what is going on and the fact that the characters change genders or refer to themselves as I, him, she, he and her is ridiculous and I'm talking about a character that refers to themselves as all that mentioned before. I am also unsure if the author changes the perspective as it is fucking annoying to be sherlock homes and try to decifer the message the author has left. It reminds me of a google translated chapter but worse. All in all, the author just needs to writw better or get and editor and then it will ba all good. P.S. Sorry if the review sounds weird. I as writing on a phone.
Story is really good to have mc as a marine im looking forward to the development of mc when conflict between pirates and marines arise what will he chooses but it have a lot of grama mistakes that need an improvement that is how the writer use He She Him Her in wrong position
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The story is almost unreadable.Hard to keep up with whats going on due to grammar but thats fine since you should expect that in most of these fanfic...The real issue is that there is no plot and nothing in the story seems to matter. All the mc does is study and train(like almost every chapter is dedicated to the grind) but the bad part is that the grind doesnt matter!! The author both wants and doesnt want an op character at the same time and it shows...the mc is super talented and trains all the time but makes 0 actual progress(at one point he is getting far along in his haki training but then a few chapters later is JUST starting to learn haki...huh?)..had hopes that at least the harem will be good but nope he's the cliched dense protagonist that cant tell a girl likes him and has to act baffled...example the protagonist was obsessed with one piece and watched the episodes, so when he meets hancock(who was randomly taking a bathe in the marine base without caution) procedes to do what Luffy did and said to her to get her to fall for him but then he's completely baffled when she does...and the relationships dont go anywhere its just "mc meets girl, they develop a crush on each other....somehow take a bathe together...then separates)
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Good story. The one thing that really bugs me in this novel is the usage of "he, his, him, she hers and her" they are used totally randomly. It should really be fixed. It's like an itch in the butt while you're in a public place.
Great story so far keep it up!!! You should make kaido's katana the shodai kitetsu,or at least where he finds it. You should make it where the katana that tsuru gave him is damage beyond repair. He finds the shodai kitetsu on an island in the new world,or the grandline.
Cant stand bad grammar. I dont mind shit spelling but omg, this novel gets on my nerves. I will not reccommend this novel. Author cant tell between male and female, dialog is short and uneventfull. Would rather shave my toe-nails off then read another chapter.
Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
I really like this novel. The only little problem it has is the Grammer and the release for new chapters are slow. Please continue the story I really enjoy it 😁
Verry good novel 👏📖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👍👍👍👌👏👏👌👏👏👍👌👏👏👌👏👍👌👏👏👌
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Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!! Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!!
author is a weeb who doesn't know jack **** about human biology and wanted an overpowered MC with cookie cutter background. first of all this was written in some foreign language and translated to google and grammar checked with some software, there are random words all over the story and incorrect sentence formations. he thinks babies don't need milk and have him eat some random things. a new born who can understand people is not creepy in this novel. author thinks a two year old baby can talk, behave themselves and also read at the same time and walk too.
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Can't do it, it's just one of those things that bothers me too much. Story is great but this is a deal breaker for me, sorry. He, She, Him, Her -- How do you get these mixed up so much???
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I THINK THIS BOOK HAS POTENTIAL EXCEPT FOR ITS WRIITING MISTAKES BUT ALL IN ALL A GOOD BOOK!!! ........................................................
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Very bad grammer and spelling. Cannot understand most words. Its even worse than a machine translation sometimes. Brain hurts reading it after 5chapters.
There is only one chapter left to finish volume one of this story. I hope everyone is enjoying this novel at the moment. When the last chapter of volume one is published, I will continue writing more chapters after a break of two weeks or a month. It may take a little longer but don't worry, I will not abandon this story. Changing the subject, I am thinking of publishing two new stories at the moment. One has several chapters already made and the other is yet to begin. Maybe during the break of this story publish one of the two stories that I have commented now.