my new life in highschool dxd

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Gishi_4187

Well, it would be better if the author would stop putting in filler with his childhood...... I mean, two entire chapters saying that he spends time with his loving parents are just too much when it could be explained in less than three sentences. I feel at this pace. It's going to be over 100 chapters before canon. I'm not sure about the MC because, in the beginning, he wished for a paper that grants wishes... the only thing he wished for so far was a dumb and useless cultivation system... If you won the lottery, would you settle with trading it for a meal at McDonald's? Why not have a better system that includes cultivation, like a universal energy system or multiversal gamer system? Because of this, you have him stress about his weakness and fear. Not being able to protect his loved ones. Could you not wish for protection for your loved ones with the wish paper?

LV 4

ITX_INSANE

good start but too much details but its good . i would say you should activate the system in next chap rather than going into details . cuz it will make people bored or add something that will attract them . you have the paper right then make a wish for hyperbolic time chamber or something that will help him get strong earlier .

LV 14

Aniket_Singh_1713

ok so I have read a couple of chapters so far and my first question before reading ahead is .....do the characters continue to converse like this because people don't talk like that really atleast constantly.......in your persuit of fancy vocabulary and speech you are forgoing the normalcy a book need for good emersion.....can't talk about story as i have yet to read more to make a conclusion ....so i hope i get cleared about this.

LV 2

iza_9_2

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LV 1

The_Emo_Lord

Story is good and I like the cultivator system idea in draconic Deus .It give me different perspectives about it although I don't like wrong spelling mistake in it

LV 1

Jarusauskas

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LoRD_69

So far so good but the only problem is the very detailed writing that sometimes makes it hard to keep up