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My mate is an ultra alpha
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"your my mate ,no one is allowed to see or touch you ".he growled
"Don't think that ,your are nothing to me ".she answered ignorantly .
With a swift move he pulled her into his arms and kissed her forcing her to react to his kiss
To stop him she bit his lower lips causing to bleed.....
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Good but keep updateing ,we can adjust with your mistakes but try to learn ,from them please๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Is good. BUT you are bad in english............ ............โ(-_-)โ...just for you know...... ............. (โข~โข ) (ยถยฐโยฐยถ) (>=<) (ยฐฮ ยฐ)/,,โฆ8#โฌ
I really like this story despite the choppy English translation and grammatical issues. If you can read past those things, you will really enjoy this story. Although halfway through I got a bit confused by the background of the main characters, overall it captivated my imagination and I feel satisfied. Great job!
I really like the story!! Although there are some grammatical errors, but they are pretty normal if English isn't you first language (it isn't mine either) and I can understand your struggle dear Author. Please keep it up!! ๐๐ช You are writing a good story that got me hooked after just a few chapters. P.S.: As I said, English isn't my first language, but I have a decent writing level. Feel free to ask me if you need any help. I hope you don't mind me saying this ๐ค
The story is interesting but the grammatical errors are too much. Sometimes it was difficult to know if you are writing about the past or present
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I'm sorry but the writing is all choppy and my brain hurts from trying to read this. I really wanted to read this I made it to chapter 10 but can't continue on any further. It seems like it could be am amazing story if the author takes the time to proof read before posting.
This is the best ever like omg I need more!!!!!โคโค๐งก๐งก๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐โบ๐๐โบ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ