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My Martial Soul System
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In a world with more than 99% population having supernatural abilities, a young boy named Park Eun-jae was born without any abilities.
With powerful ability users rising in fame because of their heroic deeds, he dreamt of becoming one like any other kid, who admired them. But with no powers within him, his dreams got shattered and he became an easy target for those who were stronger than him.
One day, he stumbles upon a mysterious book which had weird letters written on it.
Upon opening it, the boy got sucked into the book and transported into another world - where martial souls and spirit masters existed.
As Eun Jae was still in a daze and couldn't comprehend the situation around him, a blue transparent screen appeared before him.
[You've been granted with the Martial Soul System.]
[Please enter your username to start with the ----- ----- process.]
Will Eun-Jae be stuck in this Martial Soul world? or Will he find a way out in order to return to his own world?
To find out, please read my book "My Martial Soul System".
Note:- This is my first book which I wasn’t able to complete due to various reasons for the past year. But now that the plot is ready with chapters, I’m happy to announce that this story will be as interesting as possible.
So, make sure to vote the book and add it to your library if you want to read more.
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Writing Quality: Not that high, just decent. the author isn't even korean but he used the writing of one and from what I have known from him, he said he was fan of webtoons. Story Development: Too cliche. I have read many novels with a weak MC who has no talent but got a system. Don't know how the Author will make it stand out among other cliche novels. Character Design: MC is mature and his mother is good. Overall, good character design since the characters felt realistic. Updating Stability: The worst. Only updates 2 chapters per week. Even if this novel is good, it will be buried by other novels that updates daily. World Background: Author is not korean but uses korean world background. It was decently written so I have nothing more to say for this. Overall: It is decent. Nothing more, nothing less. There isn't anything that made me attached to this novel and feel as if its better than other novels. Hopefully, the author improves on this.
I like the book so far, though the starting seems extremely cliche, it also has a certain uniqueness to it. I'm interested in seeing how the book grows in the future and would recommend it.[img=recommend]
Concept-wise, it is generic but the hype is well done. Although the first two chapters might seem like an information dump, it is relevant and keeps up the hype. The plot, I can't say for sure yet, the recent chapters are confusing. I'm not sure I like where the story is going in chapter 5 and am confused about how it is related to the story in the prologue. In addition, some parts of world-building are slightly unrealistic in the modern context. However, this story is one with very high potential and I would love to see where this story goes. Maybe just a bit of revision in the plot and writing and it will be perfect.
The story is good . I would love to read more but with the few chapters I can't. I want to know more so I hope the writer updates more frequently. So far I love it .
The Story is Interesting and it has a uniqueness, the character seems good and the transition is great, good work by the author waiting for more chapters to come
The plot of the story is good, i can't tell much because the book has just started, but from what I have read I can say that this story has a lot of potential, so far it's quite intriguing and I look forward to more, good luck!
ok, so the story idea is well thought and I highly liked it. The way you have shown that the mc is ability less and his sad childhood, let's us gather sympathy for him. All I would like to say is that you should update more frequently.
With the available chapters that I read, I'd say this writing style is descriptive and the novel is potentially immersive. The plot is well planned. Well-done, author! I added your novel to my lib to follow Eun-jae's journey! Keep it up!