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My Lovely Miss Esper
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He is a weak man with a weak personality. Running away from home to pursue a new life, but woke up in a reality that the world is not as kind as he thought it would be.
Everyone despises him, everyone looks down on him.
But everything changes on his 22nd birthday.
It was the day his new life begins.
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Power 
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7Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Overall, the story is great and I see a lot of potential for this story. I may not be an author but the way you pieced together the outside world with the protagonist gave a vibe of a vigilante to Kurt. The grammar also wasn't bad, and the introduction of Kurt being lower than an average person but rising to power through memories of an immortal cultivator that was identical to him was fascinating. In conclusion, the story is great and I look forward to reading your novels.
I love this!! I'm only on the first few chapters, but I really like how this story was set up. The quality of this story is actually much higher than a lot of the contracted novels here. There are some grammatical errors here and there, but that doesn't matter to me as long as I can grasp the story. And it's great! Keep going on this!
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Shynobi here... I'll be shameless to give myself a vote. This is another concept novel that I will update 1 chapter a day. If many likes it and it reaches enough reader traction, I will take out the draft I have for it and continue writing. Thanks to all those who take their time to read my novels... Love you guys!