Monster in one piece world

By the way people are asking why not a dragon,griffon or a phoenix and I will be doing super op. Creatures like that. The wolf will evolve into fenrir the hawk will evolve into a phoenix I just needed a base so I can build him up.

Too rushed, although I can concur that he has become less Op and there are more characters in this retake. However the second chapter is basically a Hi then bye situration with not enough diologue or discriptions, the discriptions should continue for at least 1 more chapter then a mini traning arc followed by them leaving instead of this plan like 2ed chapter, although I like the first chapter a bit more than the previous Ps. Will rewrite this