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classic. Death, wishes, reincarnation.
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This is all i want alucard and harem. Ahahahaaha so excited. EVERY MY STONES GONE. I LOVE THIS I LOVE THISI LOVE THIS I LOVE THISI LOVE THIS I LOVE THISI LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS
First this is a harem, next the MC is not afraid to change the story lol...you will see. The MC has well let me try to say it, personality quirks. My review will stand as a must read unless the MC chooses not to follow some of the cannon...in terms of he wants to pursue certain individuals, but if he does not join there group it will make no sense. If the MC goes 100% against cannon then it will be nothing but chaos. This story has the potential to enter my top 10, so we will see!
This is by far one of the best fanfics I had the pleasure of reading, keep up the good work------------------------------------------------------------------------
The grammar is really bad. i have moments where i have no idea what's going on..................................................................................................................................
Either you have your friends liking your story and giving you a positive response or this Covid-19 got everyone messed up in the head. Pronunciation was the most difficult issue in your story, besides the outline of the story. Happy that there's something regarding Alucard but your story just killed the joy of it.
I only read up to chapter 3 but I already hate this ****. I was hoping for some OP MC due to the title, but the authy really ****ed up in nerfing him and I hate it when fanfic like this gets the mothafakin system but gets nerfed for some dumb **** reason. Haist 😩 I guess gonna look for other reads
Authors english is quite bad Chap 4 at the end he wants too kill issei because he cant steal his girls if he’s alive can he? Mc acts kinda dumb having a mental breakdown because of his own face I don’t like harems and since he’s after rias which i think is isseis fiance allready in the novel, can’t remember correclty but either way since they’re a confirmed couple allready basically i will consider it ntr since he knew it , is also a minus for me
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I feel like I am slowly becoming mentally disabled reading this grammar.................................................................................
E X P grammar is so bad, that if you want to read it, you should just plain give up. bad doesnt even cover it. i read 4 chps, and i barely understood anything. the author can't decide if characters are male of female(because HE and SHE are such difficult words to remember), random psychological breakdowns. well therese much much more, but i couldnt be bothered to spend that much time reviewing this trash.
If you can get past the writing quality, really good. MC isn’t a little *****, and he is hilarious. The system adds its own style with Hellsing, so quite interesting. Keep it up.
Говно на палке , перс ахуенно имбовый , смысла в произведении нету , одга из самых худших работ которую я когда либо читал , лучше бы сделал какой небудь банальный сюжет без гарема и всё было бы ништяк
Grammar is not so good, story isnt too cliche but is still kinda cringe. I just wish I could actually read what the author wrote! Uggggghhhhhhh....Grammarly--senpai help this this person!
It awesome really people who says this is horrible or it bad ignore those comments because this is godly ok and in 3 out 50 dxd fan fic don't go into someone peerage and the mc creates his own factian.
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Well everything is great besides the update speed however I get that it takes time especially with finals around the corner for everyone. Mine start in 2 days.
Mc should visit Dragon ball or Nature And Victim Suprise us Xypxpyxpydyduxududydudud ufufududududududuf f fufufufufudududufufufufufufudufdufufufufudufudfudududfufhfhcufu
It is a good story that has a lot of potential. The only problem that it has is grammatical errors, but the author has been getting better at the English language. Still needs work, but has improved over time.
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good start, hopefully fence where gasper is, can fortresserce killing all that vampires with their superiority complexes, after he manages to improve his power, which he believes servants of his blood, you know what to put. ----------------------- my 3 stones in another novel, I see yours recently, the first one I see that they use alucard, just wait, to see how it makes the world tremble xD. When I can, -------------------------------------------------------------------- I use the stones, and update daily. consider: - sona. - tsubaki. - grayfia. - "serafall. - "ravel" phenex. - yasaka. - Gabriel. - Kuroka. - "· ingliv ·" leviatan.