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This story is a simple one, a kid from Queens gets bitten by a spider and becomes a wanted vigilante in Musutafu, Japan.
But what if the timeline gets messed up the slightest bit? What if he came along one year before a certain green-haired boy met his idol? Even if the people around Peter Parker change, that won't make him stop doing his best to be a spectacular hero.
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Tulis ulasanThe only thing that is wrong with this is that you downplayed Peter. he had 5 months of experience and he lost to Aizawa without even erasing his ability is crazy. also wished you kept him as a vigilante tired of people in these types of stories sent him to UA when we wouldn't learn anything from there.
Membuka SPOILEReven though it's only two chapters I really like the story, the only problem is I need MORE chapters 🤝🏻
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I got to say this story really have a good promise, even though its jusr the beginning I'm already hooked bru 🥺
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hyvnn Keep up the Great work can you please do this fanfic called MHA: Ironman immediately after MHA: Spider-Man. A Mha fan is upset with how Izuku Midoriya behaved at the start of Mha. The fan also sympathizes and agrees with All for One’s plan of tearing down the current hero society, but he disagrees with how he went about it. So, he thinks that if he wants to be reincarnated as Izuku Midoriya into Mha, it would be 12 months before canon with the intelligence of Tony Stark. Harem Maria Stark Maya Hansen Pepper Potts Helen Cho Helen Parr Mirage (Incredibles) Sunset Baine Lydia Hardy Betty Brandt Mitsuki Bakugo Yu Takeyama Nemuri Kayama Tsuyu Asui Momo Yaoyorozu Mina Ashido Fuyumi Todoroki Rei Todoroki Himiko Toga Shino Sōsaki Ryūko Tsuchikawa
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i really like how you made it feel like there was a culutural diffrent between peter and his classmate most just americanise the whole story
this story is good . just hoping it doesn't get dropped . from what I have seen so far eraser head seems more known , and midoriya is more timid as midoriya was a cry baby but wasn't timid for sure , so is midoriya gonna get one for all?
Membuka SPOILERRead 100 chapters, gonna be honest it was a bit bland The early start was actually not bad, interesting start with the whole vigilante to hero shtick But in the later chapters, things got way more hectic, maybe like chapter 40ish, suddenly marvel characters are in the universe which was fine. However, the introduction of Tony and Fury was really bad because they just showed up and told Peter he was technically their property and barely contributed anything but giving Peter even more depression, meeting one other mutant, and a new suit ( that Peter designed ) My biggest complaint would be how much of a BITCH Peter is. Like yeah, I understand making a teenager spider-man a bit angsy, but like 100 chapters and it’s still not resolved. “Oh yeah I wished I just died right there” at literal chapter 90. “Why did I become Spider-Man does anyone even like me, why am I Spider-Man.” There is barely any character development. There was his relationship with Nejire which started out well, but it became really apparent that Nejire was Peter’s emotion support with Peter not doing anything for Nejire, and Nejire having to constantly worry and help out Peter was painful to read. It should be called Deppression man in MHA who has Spider-Man powers, because from the very get go, it was him being sad Also, chapter 90 and could not defeat Lizard. One without any intelligence too. And he’s still like “I wish he drowned me right there.” After willingly going after Lizard when he had the choice not to, because he literally smashed his head into pavement not long ago
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