MHA: Air Supremacy

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FleemusDesirus

Shameless Author Review! I give it 5 Stars since it's my work. I mean... would you give yourself a low score on purpose?... Anyway, jokings aside, this is the "reboot" I was talking about. New characters, new quirk, etc. I aspire to make it better than my previous My Hero Academia Fic. That's why, if you spot any errors or mistakes, please let me know, and I will fix them to the best of my abilities.

This was a good read. Definitely better than the Author's other MHA Fanfic. He has a basic but versatile quirk. Writing Quality: 5/5 It seems like the Author has gotten experience in writing. It's particularly noticeable because there aren't that much 1st Person POVs anymore, unlike in his other MHA Fanfic. The writing is comprehensible with no grammatical mistakes, to my knowledge. Stability of Updates: 4.5/5 The Author took a long break before, but so far, his Update Stability has been good. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is not fast. It isn't particularly slow, either. The story is currently approaching the U.S.J Arc, and I'm excited to see how the Author is going to go about that. Character Design: 4/5 The OCs' designs are great, but for the MC, I think the Author can find a better reference picture for him. World Background: 5/5 Nothing to say there. It's the My Hero Academia World.

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some_random_person_7621

So far it's really good, the characters are good some are OC but I like it, MC has a power that isn't too op but versitile, leaving a lot to the imagination, love it so far 👍

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Yana_Ajime

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Swooty_swootie

I’m really enjoying the story so far. The MC has an interesting quirk with a lot of flexibility and ways it could develop. it’s also nice that we got to see him not immediately be able to have near perfect control immediately, but still be pretty OP for his age (no fighting against pros off the bat) Overall all it’s a great start with a high quality of writing and fun OC. The only downside is update stability. Thanks, author, and keep it!

It's a shame that this fanfic isn't seen by everyone, here's a 5 star review for you author! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!

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DotComplex

I was loving this fic and wanted to see where it was gonna go, even gave it a few stones (though honestly he can just control the air in someone's lungs and burst them from inside so I think the quirk is a lot more OP than he realizes), but because of the new policy I can't read it here anymore. Could you please crosspost or shift to scribblehub so that readers can continue enjoying your work? Thanks

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