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Mecha Knight
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WPC #278 Entry (Urban Myth) _A book which is guaranteed to make you laugh_
Zack Trevor is a clever 13-year-old boy from Vegas who happened to find the place dry and uneventful. One day his friend Morty stops by his home and they make the biggest discovery of their lives, one that actually puts them in danger.
Aliens exist???
The conspiracy theories have been made, blurry footages have been captured and uncanny phenomenons have been revealed and they keep scientists pointing fingers countless of hours.
What if they're not here to "take over the earth" or "make humans into their herd of mindless sheep,"?
It's a thing that keeps nearly anyone awake_not really skeptics like Zack Trevor.
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I like it, it is a modern sci-fi novel with mecha and superpower mixed in whilst most of earth seems entirly modern. The main is friendly and not not stupid, though he has some trouble not having others dump consequences for their actions on him. This makes for an intersting background. I think you could have waited and collected a few chapters 10-30 to get yourself some initial readers who can help you place higher in WPC. Furthermore, it is sometimes hard to notice the timeshifts. It might help by ading something like dots ’.’ or lines ’-‘ or at least an empty line to seperate these points. Lastly, I give you the tip to consequently add names to chapters. They make it more interesting if ones looking for a novel to try out. Hope these points might help create a better story, whilst still expressing how I do like the story even if the writingquality has potential.