Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

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1stDrunkenImmortal

I really hope the author can finish the dxd fanfiction

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Mangadonf

I love my book since I’m the one to choose how things happen.

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InternetSaint

Has 1-2 cringe parts but is still easily a story worth reading. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

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Derkkill

good book and hopefully you can come back with your other story that you paused with more trolls and hilarious jokes in addition to almost manipulating certain parts of the plot

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MCF490

It's really amusing to read a child (albeit the reincarnation) pov in story. Author-san capture naive and innocent thinking of a child close to perfect. So it really amusing to read the way mc and other child behave in this story. It really a great story.

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Gabriel_Nevacchi

Acho que seria melhor contar a história sem ser o personagem principal ,mais como alguém de fora assistindo ,aí não ficaria muito forçado os ganhos de poder ,mas boa sorte aí de qualquer jeito ,lendo do Brasil aqui

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Anas_AsBEIY

رواية معجبين لكتاب هاري بوتر لديه موهبة في فنون العقل يعجبني نمط حياتهم واسلوب كتابتك في الجريدة اتمنى ان تكثر منها وتفصل اكثر يعجبني عدم التسرع في القصة ولكن بناء شخصية وربطه بالعالم بطريقة رائعة استمر روايتك جيدة A fan novel of the Harry Potter book He has a talent for the arts of the mind I like their lifestyle and the style of your writing in the newspaper I hope you will like more of them and more detail I like not rushing into the story but building a character and connecting him to the world in a wonderful way your novel continued good

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Webnovel_Addicted

this is absolutely lovely not overpowered due to less than average magic . more realistic . manipulate but not evil Dumbledore .

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david_cuenca

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Sraptor69

it's dropped so don't bother with it .....

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BurgerNight

There are only 11 chapters now, so I don't how much weight this review would hold. The grammar is good, and I like the perks he had chosen. The comedy is good, even if there's not much of it. But I definitely recommend this ff

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steve_ldho

this one bring us a different perspective of HP fan fiction series, and i loved it.

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COOL_PANDA_101

one of the best HP fanfiction i have read

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Darkiling

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Daoist1SKvKu

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

It is a good novel but the age of the protagonist is infuriating. It is age that prevents you from going out to see the world. It's nice that the author uses other characters and not the hysterical Hermione.

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Phoenix1998

I just hope he saves his mother pandora. She died when luna was seven years old...... I just hope he saves his mother pandora. She died when luna was seven years old

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ItzAether

So i far i really like the book keep up the good work

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jgonz429

awesome bit of work here. well thought out and set up to be a wild ride.

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Darkiling

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