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Penulis: Rei444

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A Marvel fanfic where the main character becomes a slime based off of Rimuru in the cave Tony Stark got kidnapped in!

Read to find out how the main character adapts to being a slime in Marvel!

No harem, and no Romance.
If you see any grammar mistakes please point them out, I regularly skim through the comments.

Note- Don't blame me if some details are wrong I haven't watched Marvel in a while.

On another note, I love reading your comments as it not only inspires me but also makes me laugh, so please comment on things you find funny or things that need to be changed

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Rei444

I like Marvel and I like Tenshura... I used Grammarly because my grammar is really really bad... I'm also bad at names, hence "Limulu" I just didn't want to copy names so I replaced r's with l's... Well I hope you enjoy this...

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GodOfDogs

Im transphobic.

1yr
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Blue_Shadow_Fire

from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time.. from a boy to a girl.. Don't waste your time..

1yr
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PerfectZero

I'll be honest, the plot is all over the place. Sometimes its he, sometimes it she. What is it? Updates idk. Writing quality is good. World background is ehh cause its marvel. Character design is ehhhhhhhhhh.

1yr
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Benoit_Valtin

Content for children, over 12 it's neither funny nor interesting. good luck to the oldest who want to force it, I held out for ten chapters.

1yr
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The_Puffer

I dont know if this a chinese translation or not but it is basicly the vibes it gives. So read it at your own risk

1yr
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StellarJade

Author is too lazy to spend 15 seconds on google to find out a characters name, so they just make one up.

1yr
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Curios_Theories

ecommended to a certain extent, it's hard to judge with the small number of chapters, but it's not my cup of tea, that's all I could say except the name of limuru, that's the only thing I didn't like

1yr
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PuddingLord

I haven't read the novel yet but I'm leaving this 5-star review to balance out the morons who only gave 1 star out of transphobia. I may change its rating based on the quality of the story hopefully it's worth it and those moron's opinions aren't worth anything as I thought.

1yr
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Pandalph

Writing quality: while there are some problems it is readable, also it’s double spaced and has next to no author notes so I give it 4 stars Updates: so far as of chap 27 there is at least one chapter a day so 5 stars Story development: I personally like it, however there is some problems. Though I have noticed that the author has changed some things as I have reread this story(the changes are plot holes and other things like that.). So 4 stars Character design: I feel the original characters are quite good though some need more scenes(Naraku) as for marvel characters for the most part they have similar personalities to what I imagine. 4 stars World background: It’s marvel….. So far it’s can’t really comment much on the original background so I will just base this off marvel and give it a 5 Overall it’s a 4.4 Hope my review helps those who want to read. Note: the main character gender sorta changes? I mean te main character goes from he to they then slowly identifys as a girl. So if you do like gender bender or anything similar don’t read.

1yr
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bledsting21

What is the original name of this book????????

1yr
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MrSimo
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That was garbage

1yr
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LEGENDARYDRAGON

Plot is almost non existing Plot is almost non existing Plot is almost non existing Plot is almost non existing Plot is almost non existing Plot is almost non existing

1yr
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Unstable_One

The story has been plenty enjoyable for the first 27 chapters. The writing is pretty fun, and it feels a bit more natural than many other MCU fics. I like the MC for now too. Unfortunately, there are a few problems.First, the protaganists age. The MC doesn't ever mention it to anyone. The issue is that Rimuru, who the MC is based on, doesn't grow. Only a few special events (ones unlikely to repeat in the MCU like mass murder to become a demon king) ever increase his size, and even then Rimuru stays looking like a child. Why suffer being treated like a child if everyone is going to quickly realize she isn't gorwing anyway? Just tell people it's an illness preventing growth. Such things exist IRL.Second problem is fairly mine, just inconsistent. Although the initial cause the the MC wearing dresses is fine, and can even be used as a reason for him to still wear them occasionally, it makes no sense why he can't get pants later. He can jusy buy them online; he's alreafy made purchases there, so nothing is stopping him. Worst case he makes them himself. Though why anyone would expect him to work on his mech in a dress and not worry about his saftey is a mystery. Finally, my biggest complaint. The MC going to elementary school. The government pushing for it is a silly excuse as the MC could have easily just homeschooled and finished all courses quickly (The fastest anyonr graduated high school IRL is at the age of 6).Going there to make friends or network is even more of a joke. School in real life is not like that. You actually need to study (or waste time doing nothing), and that would drive a college student nuts. Most communication is either at lunch or after school. He can always meet characters after school. Plus, the reasoing for accepting the female status om his ID is to avoid being treated poorly, yet going to school with blue hair and gold eyes wouldn't make everyone suspicious that she is a mutant? Or the fact that she doesn't age? And if she just transforms to look older temporarly, why not do that from the start?

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XAZVAPB0OTH

Cuido protagonista estúpido ⚠️ Cuido protagonista estúpido ⚠️ Cuido protagonista estúpido ⚠️ Cuido protagonista estúpido ⚠️ Cuido protagonista estúpido ⚠️ . O protagonista não usa direito as habilidades do rimuru de forma correta, o estupido não mata ninguém ou usa o predador, so para ter ideia, ele foi sequestrado, alguem com as habilidades do rimuru foi sequestrado e ficou com medo, ele podia usa predador em todo mundo ali, mas ele não usou.

1yr
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Knight61

En sevdiğim anime karakteri marvelde daha ne istersinki nick fury limuluya şeker verse gülmekten jsjsj genel olarak çok güzel bir kitap umarım yarıda kalmaz yazara saygılarımı iletiyorum sayonara

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Mrnoob5089

This story is interesting I would like to read more of it.

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CitricGunner

Lacking a good bit of detail. Whether its about his skills acquired via reincarnation, the skills from devouring robots(???), and just how they work like magic perception in a world with no magicules and all things so far run on physics. Meaning it is not something that pops up on the radar. Direction is a bit wacky, not really much of anything. No high stakes really and the story's direction with the mental suggestions(more like brainwashing to me) the Mc is under so to become more feminine isn't really to my taste. It feels worse considering that his feminization is basically self sabotage by his skill Great Sage, and if it were great sage from Canon, she wouldn't have made such a rookie mistake that would cost her master dearly. I don't mind a female rimuru just not 1 who is brainwashed to be 1.

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Word_Consumer

Just to balance things out a bit here’s 5 stars. It’s unfortunate people are like this there’s no need to be so rude and if you’re going to give a one star do so for a good reason.

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