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Fear... Is all I Can Feel After Realizing The
New World I Opened My Eyes In
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Tulis ulasanThe chapters are really short, like really REALLY short. On top of having no content or story within them, (theyโre too short to even tell a real story) half of the chapters are sometimes just XP and system stuff. I get itโs a system but seriously? Half the chapter being just the HUD/UI giving xp and upgrades? Whereโs the actualโฆ you knowโฆ story? Thereโs tons of grammatical errors as well, making it awkward to read. The dialogue is insanely bad and awkward too. The Bruce Banner chapter makes this very evident, I could not believe the dialogue when I read it, it sounds AI generated. This just isnโt good. I saw the views and 130+ powerstones thinking this was gonna be a good fanfic but I was extremely let down. It makes me wonder if this guy is somehow buying powerstones from people or paying them off. I just canโt see how this could be enjoyable in the slightest. To sum it up: Short chapters with no plot ๐๐ฟ Half the chapter is sometimes just XP menus ๐๐ฟ Terrible grammar ๐๐ฟ Awkward dialogue ๐๐ฟ Overall unenjoyable to read ๐๐ฟ๐๐ฟ๐๐ฟ
Well kinda not well though through idea E.g in the secound chapter he is only 2x stronger then a peak human being and yes after he got bitten. So nothing for me.
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Nรฃo faรงas harem!!!! pls! [img=faceslap] A outra histรณria รฉ boa e nรฃo contem harem, acho que numa histรณria deste tipo nรฃo fica muito bem... Mas claro... no final รฉ sempre escolha do autor.
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
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