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Martial Peak: Chaos Dragon Emperor (V.1.0)
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this is a 'Martial Peak' fanfiction and also my first time writing, so if there are any suggestions regarding the fanfic feel free to speak in the comment section.
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A young man died but was given a second chance. what will he do if he is sent to a world he always dreamed of living in. A world full of wonders and being powerful enough to destroy planets, galaxies and worlds as big as the universe.
A world dominated by myriad races, known and unknown. Where Martial arts is foundation and strength supreme. Where every turn you make leads you to unknown.
Will he survive and dominate or will he be forgotten in the annuls of time.
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Author's shameless review.🙂🙂 The story will be an AU, but will not be too far apart from the original. As i still want some events to happen as they did in the original,e.g. the opening of the inheritance cave,e.t.c. the characters except the OCs do not belong to me so their characteristics(not personality) will remain the same. I will try to update one chapter everyday, unless there is a problem or something urgent comes up I will keep up with the updates. I do not plan on dropping the fic. {Note: If you like the fic please send me some power stones, it helps keep me motivated🥺. Also if you have any suggestions for the fic, you just have to message in the comment section.}
it's good but annoying how u made the mc heal for so long but others can heal in just days and breakthrough at the same time, if you think you are making the mc too strong too quick, don't worry atley for me that's what I want to see and u can just make him act weak if it's required to achieve his goal, but only if the situation is suitable, also he has the best constitution I don't think just anyone should be able to perceive his realm, it should always come with some passive buffs, which can also give him a pass to any secret realm restrictions . Also don't stop I am giving u stones daily for the last 2 days👍, so keep up the good work. And last don't make his dao companions so close to his cultivation he has so much hax and if they can still keep up with him it's just frustrating honestly, i don't care how much more time and energy he needs for his solid foundation bs, keep them 2-3 small realms back now that the realms will have 3 stages. Well it's your fic at the end of the day so just take the one's u see fit if any at all. I will support this work nonetheless 👍
Good fanfic. Martial peak is one of my favorite cultivation novel and having a fanfic for it is like a dream comihg trur. Reviewing at ch.75. It is doing well and the mc is getting appropriate power up and I like it. The mc intervens in the plot when needed and let's the plot develop when it suits his interest which is my kind of mc. The character flow is smooth and not one-dimensional and no forced plot sticking out. I look forward to the hurricane the mc causes to the plot due to his butterfly effect. I also like to see how the author will link it together with the ploy without disrupting the story's flow.
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till now i would this is the best fanfic i have read it contains all the romance, smut, bonding btw oc and mc (like they didn't made them some kind of scum and trash ) and how the mc go through all the stuff i would go ahead and give it a try its a good one..🤘
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okay im not gonna read anymore as the mc is reborn into yang family and thats hella annoying we already seen the manga people read to not see the previous mc and thats how it seems, only reason people will continue will be because its the only martial peak fic no other reason pops to my head
bro aren't you streching story for to long, like literally this and some of the privious chapter completely filled with unnecessary things. I was waiting for the chapter for almost 2 days and when I read it, it was completely filled with fillers, while you literally skipped his other talents like alchemy, array, and artifacts. I request you to stop doing it please because after waiting for two or three days I wish for some good and progressive chapters.
Very well written! The character development is excellent, and the way he interacts with the other characters while supporting the main heroine is fantastic. I also appreciate how he takes all the opportunities that Yank Kai had while still supporting him. I hope for more chapters!
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You know I hated the premise Yang Kai older brother but I pushed through it even the comments and the way you truly take level him up then make some excuse (pills, refining etc) to bring his cultivation back down. I also ignored you going with the most boring common weapons instead of something new and unique. The biggest issue is that you basically take the things the original MC opportunities and have your MC take it when he does not need it. You made your MC a selfish hypocritical betraying leech. Taking the black book which 95% is wasted on your MC instead. Not only that your MC didn't find the book but just took it from Yang Kai. Oh but your MC gave him some pills BS. Those pills are nowhere near worth the book value to him. Not only that but you are going to take every single opportunity the original MC had which as a so-called brother is just evil and spiteful despitful. Your MC and writing are on par with Tang san and the author Douluo however he at least had some originality. You are also just forcing romance making the system give you rewards to help get a girl. No originality, no morales, forced plot, overall a subpar fanfic I do not know why it has some many high ratings oh wait it is just bots for the most part.
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Does anyone know any fantasy stories about this (Peak Combat. Martial Arts Master. Unparalleled Martial Arts God) This story is great but the update is slow
La historia está muy interesante y me agrada mucho como integra diferentes conceptos de otras novelas a ese mundo, aunque me parece que el personaje ahora mismo está muy OP y espero que sufra un poco en las batallas de más alto rango, por ahora tiene muy buen desarrollo y espero con ansias su continuación.
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Please complete it, author. And in the meantime do all the planning for the new fic.
Don't drop pleaseeeee! We need at least 1 complete martial peak fanfic.