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Mahou Machi: The Golden City
Penulis: LUM3N
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In 1964, President Gladis Knight was kidnapped. Amir and a fellow group of MIDAS operatives are sent looking for her, however, they never return.
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What a beautiful world the author has set up for us so far! The descriptions are so detailed, I can't help seeing play out like a movie in my mind. I think introducing the reader to action right away was definitely a good move for this novel. It allows you to have an immediate taste of what's going to unfold as the story goes along. Please keep up the action going forward! I have high expectations based on the first chapter. My only critique is breaking up some of the longer descriptive paragraphs in the beginning. Good luck