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Ringkasan
The transition to the new world order has begun and the government tries to prepare the citizens as best it can, with the implementation of new public policies.
Thanks to this type of politics, John is forced to work for a university, involving his students in a survival program disguised as a sports workshop.
Returning home, John mistakes his wife for his twin sister and tries to hide it. But casual sex will be the least of the problems, because there are much more important things that his family will need to learn.
SURVIVE *
Note: English is not my main language. be patient.
This will not be a classic story of an MC fighting for love or justice.
IMPORTANT NOTICE: for my mental health this will not have NETORARE sorry.
thanks for your visit and come back soon..... bye
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Utterly horrible English. Characters change gender at a whim, story doesn't flow. random emojis are used. could be a great story. does not do world building well.
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After re sending the chapters will you be adding to the story as well or just re doing the chapters?
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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