/ Urban / Lost you forever
Ringkasan
A 16 years old girl was kidnapped. When she opened her eyes she was in a forest. And she found herself raped.
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Power 
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- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Only read the first chapter, but your way of writing, the choice of words is extraordinary ❤️❤️. I am extremely impressed, but I suggest you write a novel, not descriptive writing. Try to minimize your description. All in all, your description was amazing, and your writing deserves respect.The topic you decide is also something that is so real and yet so traumatizing. I love it as you describe the society. Change the title to something easy for passersby to understand. You know most people here just scan for new stuff. Keep working hard, and I wish for your success. 👍👍
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