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Follow the journey of Klein Moretti as he explored the Dc Universe. Watch as he develops bonds, fights against beings, and searching for his purpose in a new world, devoid of family or friends. Discover with him, the joys of life, the thrill of battle, the happiness of saving lives. Follow as he creates enemies aswell as forge friendship with allies.
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I do not own any character or pictures throughout my fan-fictions. this is purely for fan-fic without any other intention.

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Secret_Observer_

> monkey see LOTM fanfic > monkey interested > monkey see Klein in DC > monkey happy > no updates for 12 days > monkey sad > think about Klein > regret

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Mr_Door001

(from ch 1) Klein doesn't feel like Klein at all. Klein is a very paranoid person who is deeply traumatized by greater power. About the corruption, idk how you fix if but I would had preferred if you keep CW as he is a very fun character, anyway, my main point is, the corruption should make him feel distant and inhuman, not cruel or anything but just not human. He should first of all, find the history, hide in it and look through the secrets of the world through Error and Fool pathway ability while talking with Him. Klein would had also never explained this much about himself just becouse someone asked unless he is trying to corrupt him and fishing for more information. Also you don't need to balance Klein's power as he should already be able to distroy multiple galaxies with the power he already had. A GOO in COI was able to send blackhole on earth even though the barrier in the privious epoch, As a piller Klein should be able to distroy one at the very least. Klein just have to send his avatar to the blackholes and thought Frozen time distroy the blackholes hence, distroy the galaxy with the speed of light, even faster if he send multiple avatar in single galaxy, with how many Avatars he can create, you can already guess the lever of destruction he can cause and by leveling, you are most likely decreasing his power. a Piller should be able to affect the whole universe.

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