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Lord of hell YAMA has transmigrated to an unknown world.
Why has he transmigrated?...
What was his purpose?...
All these mysteries have to be solved but before that, he has to solve an even bigger problem. Which is surviving in this unknown world! where cultivators are around everywhere.
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The reviews here are almost certainly 100% fake. I can't believe some people are saying that this novel has 'better grammar' or 'show, don't tell' when first of all, the bloody SYNOPSIS is completely grammatically incorrect, and secondly, the first and second chapters word count is literally 30% of the dialogue. Not just normal dialogue, but an entire BLOCK of dialogue, no stopping, no thoughts in between, but its an entire BLOCK of just talking to either themselves or to some other dude. I've seen authors just bombing us with world building or describing a scene in a massive chunk of text, but I've never seen a wall of dialogue like this before. Oh ye, did I mention it was entirely in caps? Prob forgot to toggle off the caps lock... Don't bother reading, for something that Qidian advertised, it's horrible...
This is about a fallen god, he gets transmigrated down into a wuxia world. throw in magic, warriors (I assume you should think of swordsmen+cultivation?), alchemists, and a pissed ruler of hell (& god of death) = this. This glorious tale of a fallen(?) god on his way to make a bloodbath of heaven (Does that count as a spoiler? I'm only at Ch. 19 right now so it might not be a problem)
Membuka SPOILER
Great and interesting story.it has a original plot and world building so far and i hope you do not stop it half way. **. not a fake review. pss. I need more chapters!
So far it has a great start for a future greater story. The MC is a very unique take on a real mythical god and while it hasn't gone far enough to make judgments on the world of the story at large or the specifics of the MC's motivations/feelings, the tidbits that are in the chapters so far speak of a slow build up to a great world that'll suck you in rather quickly and make you never wanna put it down. You may even re-read the chapters hoping for the author to release another chapter sooner so you can get your fix. I'll probably be there right with you to join the F5 army.
I gave my stones to yama....superb story...cant wait fr nxt chap.....................................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Nice storyline but update is kinda slow, hopefully there will be an update atleast one chapter per day. Want to read this piece everyday please!
Membuka SPOILER
Nice start so far. Nice twist Lord of hell one of 2 supreme beings finds him self in a crappy teen suddenly. Now how will he make use of his former / now diminished powers????
Membuka SPOILER
good like the character and when yama tells the teacher but the teacher do not belive he the story development kinda of need a update to make to be good
I saw a review about fake ones and I can assure that mine isn't. I follow this story and I give it my power stones because I think it deserves them. So okay, I've seen better grammar and presentation (I find it's getting better as the story goes on), and the updates are kind of... sporadic... but the story is really original with a great main character and just what it takes of fun and badass moments to make it worth reading. I really encourage starting reading it, so you can make your own opinion about it and, hopefully, like it and share this amazing and addictive story with others. Thanks for reading !
This is in interesting story. It has an original plot line and good world building so far. I hope you keep writing this novel because I really like it so far. It has some grammar issues but I have seen a lot worse. Much worse, so I don't know what people are *****ing so much about. Also this is not a fake review. I am just finishing up the chapters. Great start to an interesting concept.
It's not bad...not good...I ''liked'' it at first...then it got boring I guess...But it's not worth reading in my perspective..that's my opinion...I guess...🎭
I find this novel really great, even if I agree it'd need some editing. The story is original, as the MC is the Lord of Hell, and the development of the story is quite fast and full of surprises (for example the Stairs of Death's chapter in which Yama didn't break the record but the Stairs itself). You don't get bored and discover new and interesting things in each new chapter, what makes me like this novel a lot. Unfortunately, as I said, it would really need some editing as the ponctuation is a bit missing with really long sentences and there are some words or missing or not the most suited in some sentences. Having a followed release schedule would be better too, even if it is one chapter per week without the readers knowing the exact day, because we know at least whe there'll be a new one, and we don't check randomly. I hope there'll be a lot more readers in the future as this is one of my favourite novels.
Membuka SPOILER
I can't believe the amount of paid fake reviews on this. The story has obviously never been checked for grammar mistakes and honestly seems like the work of a middle school student's rough draft than anything else. The plot is super over used and cliched and not even well done at that, the only "twist" is that you have a cringey edge lord of a main character who is the actual KING OF HELL, but is mentally immature. So much poorly written side character monologues whose only purpose is to shove in our face how the MC is trash every other line and to beef up the word count with dry and painfully bad dialogue. This seems like it was a 6th grader's bad first attempt of writing a fanfic after reading too many and just trying to smash together a bunch of cliche regardless of if it fits or not.
An original novel with good grammar, a rarity. Author follows the"show don't tell" rule, which leads to good, descriptive scenes that really draw you in. Although the main character is the Lord of Hell, unlike other Xianxia novels, the MC doesn't get unreasonably powerful practically overnight. So far, all of the characters actually have relevance and aren't there just to make the MC look good. In other words, the story is well-written
This story is very good,I like everything about it so far.I'm dying for the next chapter to come out.I hope the girl don't get him in trouble by calling him by his own name.
Membuka SPOILER
I like it so far, hope for more chapters! 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars 140 Chars
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Very Good. Doesn't have annoying harem. Young masters are there but not spammed to excessive degree. Good progression and interesting plot. No excessively random plot bailout for mc.
very easy to grasp, quick and easy backstories that don't drag and leave vague underlining plots yet still leaving a bit lacking in the personality department for some of the characters. and he's the lord of hell, a divine "soul?" and strength gain is almost natural to the character origin anyway all in all easy read not to complicated straight to the point., release rate is pretty slow though
An impressive and original novel where the MC is not some random kid with the memories or legacie of a great being but rather the Lord of Hell himself. The strory seems currently fast paced wich is a +, and not much focus has been placed on the cultivation letting place to the OPness of the MC (retain some of his former power + full authority on demons/devils + thousands years of war and punishement=OP) A great point is that he is still Yama and not Ye Ji.