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Little Red Riding Hood, A modern day tale.
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Everyone knows the story of little red riding hood but what if she lived in modern times and the Big bad wolf was after her for more than her basket of goodies.
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Lillian was a kind and caring woman. She spent her time helping the homeless and caring for the elderly.
Her bright green eyes and flaming red hair made her look like a beautiful fairy. She was four foot four and a very petite woman.
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Breathtaking isn't it?"
She was startled and jumped at the deep sound of a man's voice.
She turned around to look into the deep dark cold eyes of a man she never thought she would ever see again. Jake, her knight from high school. Here in the flesh. She thought back wasn't his name Smith back then.
"Mr. Wolf?"
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Lillian had a great dream. She was lost in a forest and a big handsome wolf found her and help her find her way to her granny's house.
'Red, trust in you wolf and you will never be lonely again' her granny said.
'But Nana he is a wolf they are untrustworthy.' She said.
'Red my dear a wolf mates for life so trust'
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"Could not leave with a kiss?" Then he seen her face and froze. "Is everything alright?"
"Your fiancee called you need to meet her and your parents at your place at twelve thirty. Don't be late." She turned and walked away.
"Shit" He followed her out. "Lillian stop please."
She walked over and grabbed Toby's leash and pushed the button. Toby jummped off the couch one more time and went to her. She reached down and clicked it on.
"Lillian let me explain."
The doors opened and she went down. He just stood there and watched the doors close.
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"My Mr. Wolf what big eyes you have." She said smiling at him.
"The better to see you with my dear." And with that said he bent down and kissed her.
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I just know this story, it's veryyyy good. You won't regret it if you stumble to this one. The pace a little bit fast, the development of characters are good. The grammar is nice with some typos here and there. I loveee this story. Keep it up author. Always waiting for the update ๐๐ช๐ชโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐
This is a fun new twist on one of my favorite classics ! and Iโm so glad I found this!! The grammar is occasionally slipping like one example that came to mind off the top was โlyeโ instead of lie, I guess thatโs spelling but Iโm not that good at grammar myself so I canโt speak on that as much.
La portada me atrajo a ver la sipnosis, la sipnosis me hizo leer la novela, y hasta ahora me ha encantado esta historia.๐ The cover attracted me to see the syno**is, the synopsis made me read the novel, and for now I love this story.
Ohhhhh...looks like a very entertaining story from what I can get of it from the summary. I will for sure read it! I hope Iโll end up loving it๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐIโll give it the high rating because it has many great reviews and I trust that it will be great
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it is definitely must read I love that lilth is a very loving caring person but she has a backbone and that jack is not just a jerk making out to be very loving at least to her so you in a rooting for them like do Jack go Lilith
is a nice little rendition of Little Red Riding Hood if you like updated my modern fairy tales to read i give you all thumb up[img=recommend]
This is a great book. Iโm glad that I didnโt g have to use coins to finish this book. However there are a few mistakes. Like his and her, tomorrow is spelled wrong etc. But its wonderful overall.
Story was interesting eventhough the contract and flash marriage Isnโt really my thing. The grammatical error in the beginning wasnโt that bottersome but the last 10 to 15 chapters it became worse, like the writer wasnโt in to it anymore. Some parts where even confusing. but overall it wasnโt bad.
If you like fast pace stories this is for you. Loved how you didn't drag events unnecessarily longer than needed. Story line is not bad either. Enjoyed the book. Couldn't put it down till I finished reading it all.
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Good but needs proofreading. ๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐ค๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐ชโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ๐๐ค๐
Such a cute cute romantic lovable love story it is...!!!!! Chweet red hood and handsome wolf...!!!! Good one author...!!!! I like it a lot ๐
I love the story but its like a ripped book. You are enjoying reading it suddenly you discovered that half of the books pages was ripped out. How to end your reading becomes the problem
Need's a beta reader. Grammer need's improvement. Characters feel bland. Great idea. It just need's more substances. Flesh out the characters more. Share the emotions with the reader. 140 characters is not enough.
โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ
As a fellow writer, I hate to see something good rot away because no one wants to give it a review. I hope this will help you and make you realize how great a writer you are. Writing Quality: 5/5 No problem with the quality. A few mistakes, but that can be easily ignored. Stability of Updates: 5/5 I checked and saw your chapter releases. Keep it up and you'll go a long way. Story Development: The concept is great and witty. The romance is promising and if the right elements are pulled into the picture, then the success of this novel is assured. Character Design: 5/5 The Better to see you my Dear. Classic and Classy. World Background 5/5 Your world building is great! Keep it up! Overall: 5/5 I'm looking forward for future updates. I love to read good stories and I hope to see more from you ;)