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It's a simple story about the mc traveling to different worlds from movies and TV shows, with a system that helps him to become a God.
First World: The Vampire Diaries
Second World: Harry Potter
Third World: Coming soon.....
I will update it every Monday and Friday.
Cover Image is AI generated.
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The plot had hope but then it slowly became cliche and I didnโt enjoy it anymore He kills Marcel and silas and then gets mission to kill klaus I get that heโs op but like what is the driving force of all his actions? I get wanting the rewards but like whereโs the plot like this is going way too fast and itโs not even fun to read anymore
based on the 7 chapters ive read its a decent start but id suggest getting someone to proof read your book before rewriting it. you've got a handful of mistakes in each chapter. but the overall feel is pretty good
more please ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Great Book ๐ Keep it up?๐๐๐๐๐ I just hope you update faster ๐๐๐
great start๐๐๐๐๐ waiting to see how u take it from here๐๐๐๐
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I'm don't have any bad to say but I hope you continue it and give him the beast serum
I sincerely hope this continues so far it has been very interesting I look forward to seeing where this goes