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Lesbian Slave(GL)(LGBTQ+)
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Ringkasan
A Lesbian who creates her own empire called Black Angel Society, a society full of LGBTQ+ elites and common members.
Shun loves to collect slaves and create her own harem, if you enter her world you're always welcome to play with fire.
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Well.......... First things first, I got curious with the sinopse so I give it a chance, but once started the first chapter I already wanted to drop this, the way it's writteni t'sterrible and the dialogs get confused 'cause the author didn't organizedit in a way to make clear who's talking. Even with such a problem, I continued to read, since every story deserves a chance. However there it is when the second problem arrived, the development is hushed and seems too forced, the characters don't seem to being thought before their were written. I stopped at chapter 7, because I couldn't endure anymore of this.
I tried reading this per a review, I couldn't get past the second chapter. It was truly a garbled mess. I thought the grammar in the last story I read was bad, but I was oh so wrong!!! Attempting to decipher the English and what was trying to be conveyed in this story literally made my head hurt. There's no way I am willing to pay for this. Fix it and maybe we can talk, but until then, it's going to be a HARD NO for me!
please please don't tell me that this thing end [img=nervous]yeah when are we expecting the next chapter let them be next chapter[img=update]
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this is such a steamy, hot gxg romance that whets my appetite for adventure, love, and spice! definitely worth a binge read! I really dig the concept and think the English is on point!