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Law of Creation
4.07 (18 peringkat)
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Arriving at the new world, an ex-cultivator vowed to never cultivate anymore
A naive little girl lived in a world full of deceit, she is faced with choices.
Treading along a new world with a lot of secrets. Who could she trust?
Will she fall? Or she will triumph over the mortal?
Follow the journey of Xia Mingyue, a mighty cultivator that was trapped in a weak body in the new world, new place, without cultivator.
*Warning, a slow-paced story until around chapter 80.
Announcement;
+Release 7-9 chapter a week, depending on my RL
+For each 50k views, there will be 3 bonus chapter that week.
+I will be posting this story on RoyalRoadl.com under the same nick, FrosDream193
But don't worry, I am mainly active in webnovel :D
*This is my first story, so I will appreciate various suggestions and critics.
*Story by FrostDream193
*Edited by FrostDream193
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I am sorry to fill the review pages for a little information. 1. since posting a little announcement was a little hassle in the review area, i will post them in the synopsis area. 2. I will readjust the released chapter into 10 chapter a week, maybe sometime less thank to RL. But don't worry, each chapter would definitely above 1k words 3. After the end of this arc (maybe every time an arc is finished), I will readjust all of the posted chapter. There are some point that needs to be reedit, like grammars, tenses (my mortal enemy), writing style, and maybe i will readjust the story narration here. 4. And thank you for all of your support :D 5. Let me be shameless this time and give myself a full 5 score XD
Okay, overall the improvement of the story is good. Writing quality is not the best, but much better than before. If i have to point out something, please give us more action lol
The story have a slow pace Fortunately currently author is posting a few chapters in a day. Maybe author should post a few chapter in a day until it has a stable storyline? I mean something like fighting, or fighting, or maybe fighting. And the synopsis is not too long, and there is no many spoiler from it. Well to tell the truth I am more interested in novel with synopsis like that lolololol Wel currently that is my review. Currently chapter 5, after maybe around tenth or twentieth chapter, I will give more review.
This story is good, the MC isn't op at all, I felt pity for the MC when I read chapter 43, plz update quickly 140characters140characters140characters140characters
The first thing that attracts ppl to the story is Loli in summery XD but it's a nice story however with an interesting style which is fun to read in free times
I have been lurking in here, and i think this story is enjoyable. even though the first tens chapter (until around 80th chapter) is similar to a random story lol. But maybe it is only some world-building thing, so i don't want to say anything Following after that, the story is more adventure-ish and it is a little interesting. the pace of the story increases at the later chapter (around 100th maybe), and it goes better. I don't want to say anything about writing style since i am only a free reader hahaha X'D Good luck with the story and DON"T drop the story please, you have too many foreshadowing.
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Decent and different from a lot of other novels which only consists of cultivation. 😁 Keep up the good work. I will help you edit the chapters just dont know where to send the edited chapters :)
Interesting world and concept. However, the writing makes it difficult to enjoy with some confused writing in some places. Makes it hard to understand what is going on in some places. Especially with the alternating view points where it shifts randomly.
Having caught up with latest chapter I just had to give a second review I hate the fact that , at least for me, this novel which started as such a charming and cute story, has changed into something infuriating with abundant signs of loathsome tropes seen in some other novels. The author has every right to write whatever kind of novel she wants obviously,but this definitely ain’t for me. Everything took a nosedive from chapter 78 onwards. Annoying women and pusxy whipped men,plus the main character herself has become too annoying for me and I only see things worsening as story progresses. Currently author seems preoccupied with RL issues and I hope things work out on her and and I wish her success. I know some people will like this but I’m gonna have to drop this. Alas, had such potential pre 78
I kinda like the story especially the genre . I AM just a little disappointed with the writing style because i somehow see that this is like being treated like a wattpad which makes the story somehow messy. (As someone from the field of literature which i dont brag) i advise that just make it 3rd person POV because creating different POVs just makes it messy..... Pure story doesnt need difderent POVs it is only very useful if you want this to become movie but even movies needs a story which is in 3rd person POV and the job is given to their own writers to create different POVs... I hope thay the next chapters will be written as I advise.. You can also read other novels in the webnovel (especially the top rankings) you can observe the way they are writing it... how the events are areanged logically.
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okay, i will make some point of this story. a reincarnated cultivator in another world, something similar to magic world i think? from what i read, the story is more like a slow paced novel. from what i see, there still a lot of development for the world. i wish to see more about char development (mc is something closer to hikikomori, but she tried to change) the unfortunate thing is author sometime didnt describe some detail of event. maybe it is a plot for later?
Good story and pace as of now looking forward to MC develop her own dao ane cultivation technique to become a progenitor of a new dao. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
Membuka SPOILER This novel is great. Really charming and fluffy moments with some proper lore and world building thrown in. The characters are well developed and believable so far. Main character is a cute and charming little girl right now but I expect she will slowly grow up as story advances. I didn’t find it slow to be honest , it’s got a nice pace to it. The grammar, while not the best, is definitely not gonna make you wanna pull out your hairs nor gouge out your eyes. It’s quite readable and story is very promising. Recommend
This story has a lot of potential. It could be amazing if I could read sentence from sentence without misunderstanding anything it's okay to have a mistake from time to time but literally every other sentence had a mistake, and big ones. In every chapter. It just takes away from the story. And until the is a better everything from beginning to end, I just don't think that I will pick up this story again. But good luck because other than the writing it is pretty good.
Story looks interesting and world building is pretty good, but I dropped this novel for good. English is all over the place, giving me strong MTL feeling, and that's not something I'm willing to tolerate.
Interesting storyline even though it is a bit confusing but still it is quite captivating and exciting and I would like to read more updates soon from the author. Kudos
You have my spirit stones. Also, I would like to make a suggestion. Use a sentence checker or at least try it out. It's very useful and I'm sure it will help you . ( Add .com to sentencechecker or just google it :)
I am sorry for Dao friends here, there is something bad happen. It's not very bad, it is just something annoying, there is a bug on inkstone platform. If you are reading this, that means you are lucky. # skip # chapter # 2 # and # 3 Make it simple, the posted chapter 2 and 3 should be chapter 6 and 7. Thanks to law of bug, those new chapter is inserted between chapter 2 and 3 Even if I have delete those bugged chapter and reupload it, as you can see on table of content. Once again i repeat my message, skip chapter 2 and 3!