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Koby the Pokémon Master
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Self Insert as Koby with Poké Balls and Pokedex as a system. One Piece has many animals (except chopper) that can be tamed. This story will be like a retelling of One Piece but with Koby in the mix of all the adventures of the straw hat pirates. Also, maybe there's a chance to put pokemon in the world of one piece.
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Writing format for the 1st chapter. And the start of volume 2 until present.
(????) = Thoughts
[????] = Moves
"????" = Dialouge
『????』= Inanimate object or Divine
Plus, I will use some Pictures and GIF for a scene.
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I think it's really good! The grammar and execution could be a bit better, but the concept overall is great. Also, if you ever need a beta reader/editor, you can PM me, and i'd be down to help out.
B/C The author is a savage and doesn't go by the rules(didn't give himself a 5 star), we got to give him a 5 star before even reading! IF UR WITH ME GIVE HIM A -5 STAR-
this is a nice fanfic no harem no xian chinese stuff no young master syndrome very good actually im thanful you made it non harem so here a stone thank you and continue with your story [img=recommend]
This seems really interesting and here is five stars to counterbalance that one dude that gave you one star just because there wasn't a harem.
usually don't write a review but i just had to because this is by far the best one piece fanfic I ever read! aside from a few grammatical errors it is perfect in my eyes. it follows the original plot with coby in it, the pacing of the story is great, the mc and his pokemon have lovable personalities and he writes all the characters really well like they are original characters. and if you don't like systems like me don't be scared the system here is not really a system it's more like an afterthought than the primary focus of the story. So in summary the story is a great read. I really recommend it! keep going author-san!
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I like the idea already without reading it....................................................................................................
NO HAREM???????? FUCK YOU AUTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..............................................................................................................................................
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For not being a shameless author and rating yourself take 5 stars .....................😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😋😜😜😜🤪🤓😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ ...
Exp....... Please don't drop........................ It's good..............................................................................
good story for me but hey everyone is different. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
You have done it so Koby is truly a strawhat and doesn't take over the story and replace Luffy, he has his own place and own story. So many fail at this and the pokemon are great. looking forward to seeing all the pokemon you add and if the animals ever evolve themselves.
Great work hoping to see more of [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]it
one of the great fan fiction i ever read....... i really enjoy the story good background story good character development weak to strong got a lot of potential to go further hope this story will not be drop (english not my first language so sorry if non of review reader didn't understand)
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Love the work so far. The pacing is really well done compared to other one piece fanfics. keep up the great work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I like this story. yyyyuuuiimyyvyvhhgdsgjjjh yyyyuuuiimyyvyvhhgdsgjjjh yyyyuuuiimyyvyvhhgdsgjjjh yyyyuuuiimyyvyvhhgdsgjjjh yyyyuuuiimyyvyvhhgdsgjjjh
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This is my first fan-fiction novel in which I was inspired by UchihaFanatic. I love One piece. just like his work called, Shinobi lIfe! the mc doesn't have a system, just a pokédex to monitor his pet(pokemon) and his strength or check the strengths of other creatures. Doesn't work towards humans except for him Also, there is no harem in the story. Koby role in the crew will be boatswain that is in charge of the ship's anchor and ship boat and more. if there's advice for his role. please advice me [img=recommend]