Bab 27: Chapter - 27 Farewell
Riboku thought for a moment and then looked at the scout. "Did you smell anything unusual in that area or notice anything out of the ordinary?" he questioned.
"Yes, sir. There was indeed an unusual smell, and the grass beneath our feet felt different. I thought it was normal for that area... How could I have missed it? It's all my fault, it's all my fault," replied the soldier, weeping. Riboku then asked the crucial question.
"Did you see any bodies in the area? Any signs of an army or anyone else?" he inquired.
"No, sir, I didn't notice anyone, but there was a huge flagpole at one side and a note attached to it. This is it," said the soldier, handing Riboku a note written on wooden paper.
"A gift to the Impotent Riboku - From Leylin of Storm Eagle."
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Riboku was shocked that someone not only knew about the hidden army but also his name. Meanwhile, the battle was reaching its climax on the field.
As the monstrous generals Hou Ken and Ou Ki clashed, Gi Ka stealthily approached, aimed his bow at Ou Ki, and released an arrow that pierced Ou Ki, giving Hou Ken the opportunity to strike him down. As Hou Ken slashed Ou Ki, Shin launched an attack on Gi Ka and slew him.
Meanwhile, elsewhere on the battlefield, Tou defeated the enemy general Chou Sou, who had underestimated Tou's abilities. Tou then proceeded to the area where Ou Ki was battling. Shin, now mounted on Ou Ki's horse, charged forward.
Driven by instinct, Shin charged on horseback toward the east side, while Tou strategically used the army to create a path for Shin to break through the battlefield. Shin reached the eastern mountains, where Ou Ki explained how a general perceives the battlefield.
Meanwhile, Tou and Mou Bu also charged through the field, finding their way to the eastern hills. As they reached higher ground, Ou Ki spoke his final words to the army.
He handed his glaive to Shin. Suddenly, Ley Lin approached from behind the bushes with his unit. Ou Ki looked at him with a smirk.
"Nfufufu... Little Lin, I thought I'd never see you again," Ou Ki said, seemingly questioning why Lin was late at his end times.
"Sorry, General. I prepared a gift for your farewell," Lin replied, gazing towards the east of the forest. Everyone present turned to look in that direction.
There, they saw a massive fire engulfing the forest, but the flames were burning in the shape of a bird. Lin had created a blazing bird shape, representing the legendary Battle Bird of Ou Ki, one of the Qin greats.
Ley Lin and all the members of his unit clenched their fists in reverence. Together, they all knelt down on one knee.
"I give my tribute to the mighty monstrous bird of Qin, one of the Six Greats. Farewell, General," Lin declared solemnly, paying homage to the legend.
Ou Ki finally smiled, satisfied, and then gazed at the sky as he departed from this world. Tears flowed freely among all the onlookers in that solemn area. Even a small tear escaped from Lin's eyes, echoing the shared sorrow and respect for the fallen hero.
Following that, the enraged Qin army launched a relentless slaughter, resulting in heavy casualties and losses among many generals. Ri Boku eventually ordered the Zhao army to retreat.
Qin successfully reclaimed Bayou, Lin's unit steal supplieas from both main and reinforcement forces of zhao.
Finally, the battle came to an end, leaving a mixture of emotions among the participants. Some felt sorrow for the loss of a great general, while others celebrated the victory achieved on the battlefield. However, above all, the outcome of the battle marked a solemn farewell to a legendary general under the heavens.
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