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King of Pests (Discontinued)
Penulis: egusisoup
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After the mysterious disappearance of his dad and the unlucky accident that led to his death, Kay was transported to a fantasy world where he was reborn as a... fly?
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Keep up the heightened detail and good storytelling! :D, I'm always going to support you!!! I honestly can't find anything that would possibly need changing yet, the writing is good, the storytelling is great, and the detail is immense. If I do see something that might need re-evaluation I will bring it up though!
I like the concept!