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Journey Home – Multiverse, starting at the Avatar TLA
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After his death, Michael Cordato faced a choice: to find the world in which he was supposed to be born originally or to spend his next eternity in the Void.
Well, his choice was obvious.
Realizing that his journey might be a long one, he took one rule for himself. Leaving the worlds better than he found them.
After all, how hard can it be?
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Greetings.
This fanfic is about the journey of a former member (theif/torturer) of the Russian Mafia in search of his home. MC won't be a cold, manipulative bastard and will try to help others. Of course, he will not help everyone he meets, and he certainly will not sacrifice himself for the sake of strangers.
I already have several worlds that he will visit, but if you have any suggestions, then write them in the comments.
List of worlds:
1. Avatar the Last Airbender.
2. Fullmetal Alchemist.
3. Harry Potter.
?. Assassin's Creed (don't know which part, I'll figure it out).
?. RWBY (a big maybe, never watched the show).
?. JOJO (maybe).
?. Solo Leveling (maybe).
?. Trash of The Counts Family (maybe).
?. Winx (if I get bored, but it will get bloody).
?. Marvel universe.
Final World: ?
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Can't you add azula to the harem, I know I'm late, I know, I would be happy if you put some love on azula
Kinda bad fic, seems unnecesarily angsty, and mc constantly does or has stuff happen to him which seem very forced. All the spirit stuff takes to much time especially since thats in my opinion the most boring part of the avatar world, and instead of exploring the world better mc instead gets pushed around by spirits and other such nonsense. He seems quite immature, reckless and doesnt really think about his actions. The entire fic is just rifled with plotholes and forced plot devices. Writing is okay and thats about it, got to about 30 chapters then it got to annoying to finish. Dont waste ur time on this
The writing quality is pretty good in terms of grammar but the flow and pacing of the descriptions makes its feel a little boring and unnatural to read. The updates seem to be around 1 chapter every 1-5 days so definitely 5 stars there. Development was an issue for me as it felt really stale and forced honestly, along with the design and direction the characters have taken. Everything kinda just happens because it happens and makes everything really predictable and mundane. World back ground is a sticky one as the author can easily say "It's and AU." yada yada but yeah that whole spirit bending and Raava+Vaatu thing really threw me off. Choice of love interest was terrible but thats my opinion and it was put to vote so i can't complain, overall an exciting premise (Multiverse Avatar fic) but poor execution imo. And another annoying thing was the guy is called Michael in a world of South Eastern asian names, that's just me being picky though. Decent book but not 5 star worthy if i'm honest. (I got to around chapter 20, so it may improve.)
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I started writing this fanfic as a distraction from writers block on another fanfic of mine. Everything I wanted to say has already been written above, so just enjoy reading. I would be grateful for any constructive criticism. A Simple Russian Boi out.
Multiverse travel with a legitimate need fir the mc. Also a good reason why the pressure keeps on increasing for mc. The reason these things are important can be found when you read this story.
Uuuuuhhhhh, YYYOOOOOO. I came over here because he stopped writing Prideful Alchemist in MHA and I was pleasantly surprised. 4.8, take my stones you talented b*stard. Updaaaaaate!
hey chose one of the Final Fantasy games or movie as the last world it would fit perfectly 😆...............................................
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Katara is gone but at least we can have Azula or Ty Lee I'm too lazy and tired ............................................................
I quite enjoy the story, I know it’s not a favorite but it was to me when u said assassins creed I was hoping u might consider origins as the time of choice
I love it, an author that does not have extreme Biases against religion good and order, and so forth, but is netural and doesnt even mention it in the story, plus this story is extremely interestIng so I vote it a five stars
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