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Everyone has a chooses in life. One my be delt cards of hardship while other are delt more powerful cards. Beth and Sarah were both delt a low hand in life but they choose to rise above and fight. While Alex and Jack were delt a better hand they too have chosen to stay strong and lead a good fight for the new life they are looking at. Can they get and keep the girls or will they lose to an underhanded deck of players that chose to tear apart their world... The choose is mine and...It's up to me.
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Good one ... This is one fast pacing story.....!!!! Thur who love short stories can give this a try ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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the story is siMple and beautiful... I wish that the action parts were described as the RomaNtic parts were described... we know its planned but when it happens its too fast like a summary... but i loved it... โฅ๏ธ
I thought this story was pretty good. It kept me interested from the beginning. It had some plot twists that made it even better. There were minor grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that took away from the story. Good job author.
Greatly story..... Unexpected I liked it... storyline very good smoothly and enjoying to read.... thanks you author..... yours job very great ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐