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One fateful day, Akira Celestia, a high school student, found himself abruptly summoned as a hero to another world along with his entire class. Unlike many protagonists, Akira's life prior to this event was far from tumultuous; he was not mistreated, and he was not a loner. On the contrary, his parents adored him, and he was in a loving relationship with his girlfriend.
However, upon entering the new realm, Akira discovered that everything he encountered adhered to clichéd templates. Despite God's proclamation that he could not bestow any gifts upon him, Akira mysteriously acquired the most potent powers compared to his peers. Cast out of the castle, he garnered the concern of the most beautiful girl, while a handsome hero-type harbored disdain towards him.
Akira's parents continued their lives in Japan, and his love for reading manga and novels fueled his distaste for clichéd scenarios. Determined to break free from the narrative constraints surrounding him, Akira resolved to forge his own path, defying the established templates.
Embark on this journey to witness how our exceptionally empowered protagonist navigates and challenges the clichéd norms of the world he now inhabits.
This story follows a structured template, deviating from narratives with mysterious plots or character development from weakness to strength.
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Tulis ulasanGenerally the novel deserves 2 stars, its main problem is predictability( because of the genericity of the world and story). Writing quality: 1 Star. Although the spelling of most words is correct, the grammar is nothing short of atrocious, frequent mistakes in sentence structure and a noticeable lack of some words. Updating stability: 3 Stars. The updates are mostly random in random numbers, however they are relatively stable. Story development: 2 Stars. The story follows the generic ‘class summoned to another (fantasy) world’. It is therefore predictable and offers no mystery or tension whatsoever. Character design: 1 Star. The character is the subversion of a trope gone wrong, this specific genre requires an underdog protagonist because of the way its structured, if the top student with everything is the main character he offers no character development, as he stays as the same ‘top’ character and considering the use of ‘overpowered’ in the synopsis doesn’t experience any change. World background: 2 Stars. The world presented is the generic medieval kingdom, most likely with heavy inspiration from the anime ‘arifureta’. It is known for its simplicity, presenting no opportunities for ‘secret’ plots.
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the author should revisit primary school before attempting to write something again. the mc is boring and has no character, the love intrests feel forced and the world behind it is mid af. the author thinks he outsmarted the "isekai" cliche only to write a story which i have read several times before. dont waste your time with this and please dont give this dumpster fire of a story any money :)
Penulis True_Novelist
Fun to read this story. It reminds me of when I first started reading novels and always got irritated by the beta protagonist but here it is fun because of the good protagonist.