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An avid Skyrim player found himself inside the Danmachi world, as his game character nonetheless!!
Okay seriously, I just wanted to make a danmachi fic without the MC joining yet another Hestia familia and babysitting Bell - scratch that guys! He train bells in chapter 33! What's wrong with me.
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Tulis ulasanBro tell me honestly is English your fith language. How is it that all eleven of your chapters structureully be jack **** yet your synopsis be good. The storry idea is good but GODDAME does the way you write his speach and inner monolouge piss me off. Your to wishy washy with details and explanations that aren't even necessary to add in. I mean when he entered the hostes of fertility and spoke with mia you wrote or mia said " your a ball of odd." REALLY, A FUCKING BALL OF ODD. Couldn't you have just said he was strange or actually use the phrase correctly for example." Your an odd one aren't you" Besides that update is okay background is just danmachi and the charachter design of the mc is unique.
Membuka SPOILERAre you still going finish the story or are you dropping writing forever? pls answer I want see if i can still drop stones on this book ......
hey great work you have me hooked up in your writings i agree with you about the MC joining the hestia familia and babying bell it is lame and the concept about that new goddess i just loved it about goddess of death being thought as evil although you making the MC a KHAIIT was a bit hard to swallow will you add romance about the MC and the GODDESS a novel just doesn't feel complete with romance being there and i really liked the character of the goddess and you by the way are really good at conveying emotions through words on that chapter when the MC joins the familia of the goddess with just a tint of sorrow...keep up the good work and i hope this novel is continued seriously by you.
Membuka SPOILERthere are not many good danmachi novels but this is not only good but interesting as well i hope you continue ur work you are a very good writer.
I don't understand your story.....too much useless detail you put in the story....if you make it more simple, the story would be great_______________________________
Good stuff..................................................................................................................................
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he i read this novel and you did a good job i have read some of your other works like weltkrieg (youjo senki) and it was a well written novel and very well detailed
As a fellow Skyrim player, I'm really enjoying the amount of character development your put into the MC. I hope you continue writing this fanfic and have a great new year...
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Very nice, beside something that made little to me at least, i think ? But very nice nontheless, i recommand it for reading ! Hoping for updates soon !
I'd just give it 5 stars for the current cover picture, but it's also a good book ........................................................................
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As a fellow skyrim player, this automatically deserves 5 stars and we'll just see if it deserves this. dgfsdljkgfopdopdevdfedfsdfsdfdsdfssfsdfsdf