While shocking events were unfolding in the Primordial Empire, Noah was still marveling and pondering on the Primordial Eye and the Eye of Ruination in the Novus Universe.
Something that was at the back of Noah's mind as he obtained the Primordial Eye and the Eye of Ruination was the fact that they were things that were in the playing field of Primordials. He had to know just how common it was for Primordials to obtain the Primordial Eye, and whether every single Primordial was born with it or they had to acquire it in a unique manner similar to him.
He thought back to the only Primordial he had met so far as he wondered if that veiled woman also had something like this!
There was also the Eye of Ruination that should be just as rare if not more in Noah's eyes, where if a Primordial obtained both this eye and the Primordial Eye- they could traverse the veils between different Realities.
Yesterday happened to be a Sunday and today is MLK Holiday so I had some free time to pump out extra chaps. If you guys enjoy 4 Chapter mass releases like today, be sure to vote with the Golden Tickets and keep us in top 10!
Also thank you guys again for the continued feedback. The positive supportive comments and critiques I love browsing through, and the negative critiques...I steel my heart and still read through them! As with any field or profession, I believe one can always improve themselves in what they do as nobody will ever be perfect.
Pacing is one of the biggest things I continue to work on, making sure to have the fast progression I've loved in the past thousand chapters while also making sure characters have some depth aside from being heroes or villains, good or bad. I've noticed at times that characterization and worldbuilding suffers in exchange for the rapid pacing, so this issue is constantly in the back of my mind to make sure the imaginative world I have in my mind is presented as clearly on paper as possible. I've also read other stories that have too much worldbuilding and are too slow for me that I either skip chunks of paragraphs or chapters 'just to get to the good stuff'. So it's a balancing act that authors continue to work on. As always, I write what I myself would love to read, and I've changed entire plotlines and characters based on this feeling in the past thousand chapters.
One of the solutions I've found is to increase the rate of chapter releases, but this solution is restricted by the time I have to write as it happens on rare days like today. I'll continue to look for more solutions! This is one of the longest author thoughts I've written in a while but long story short- I know there's always room for improvement, so keep the feedback coming! ^.^
Tomorrow's working chapter titles: Confidence!, A Fantastical Finding! I
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