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Gazing lifelessly down at the thin Japanese sword in her clenched hand, the fifteen-year old's dull brown eyes followed each drop of crimson liquid hang off the tip of the sword and land soundlessly on the ground.
"Celestia." The voice of a familiar creature reached her human ears.
Her gaze trailed up to meet her masters pair and this initiated his anger but she remained emotionless as he began to complain.
"What the hell was that just now? I've been training you for the last ten years and I don't remember you fighting with the speed of a snail. I wouldn't have been surprised if these weak demons killed you."
The straight black strands of Celestia's silky hair sway slightly under her hood as she stepped off the pile of dead bodies. The sharp weapon she summoned earlier transformed into light, allowing itself to be absorbed by the tattoo on the palm of her hand. The male glared as she disregarded his last words and spun on her heels, intending to leave the sickening scene.
"How many times have I told you to not act like that towards me?" His form materialised in front of her, this allowing his long fingers to wrap around her neck.
Celestia choked as her body was driven back and smacked against one of the trees in the vast forest. He released her once her face grew pale and watched smugly as she coughed and desperately inhaled as much as oxygen as she could. She bowed stiffly towards her master as soon as she managed to sort herself out.
"I apologize, Zerro."
His lips formed into a cruel grin and he unexpectedly planted a kick in her stomach causing Celestia to hit against the rough bark a second time.
"You are just a weapon…nothing else."
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During a majority of her life, Celestia suffered through misfortune after misfortune, thanks to the demon, Zerro, who tricked her into creating a contract with him. When Han, a new student transfers to her school, he makes it his mission to help lift away her suffering. Will he succeed or will Zerro stop him from doing so?
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I just love the way you describe the current situation and your writing style, the story too is interesting. Character designs are done so well! I gave you a power stone! May your work win the contest! Keep up the good work, Author!
Hats off to you author, you ae doing great. I love your writing. The plot is really intriguing. I realy wanna see what will happen to the FL? Your fantay isreallyalluring. More power to you.
This book has all the potential that it needs to rank on top with a good descriptive narrative style, character developement and structural elements. I am curious to see where this story leads to and how the author will continue to execute what she already built so far. Keep going!
I highly recommend this story! It's unique and has a captivating plotline. The characters are well thought out and develop nicely throughout. I admire and applaud the universe you have created and the characters within it. I found it easy to read, and thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you so much for writing this story. I look forward to reading more of your work 😊 Xoxo
The story is awesome the best part is that characters don't seen one dimensional..Most fanfic have side characters that are written as if they live for the MC's sake...Over all great writing quality...Story development is great...Update stability character design are awesome as well....
I highly recommend this book, it's a truly a marvelous novel, I like how the author describe things which makes me wanna read further and further. Definitely going to keep this to my library.
the story is really intriguing. I love the cover, and the synopsis reveals nothing of the initial plot twist, which I really appreciated. Perhaps a tighter writing style could make the reading flow better. In any case, your work, your choice, writer. Really good work, I'm glad you're having success.
This book is...wow! the title, the book cover, the first chapter Dre my attention and took me away. Love your works great author, please keep it up and continue to update, can't wait to read more about this book
It's a beautiful story, I gave this novel a total score of 5.0 because despite having only 25 chapters, the author has created a very enticing plot . the way that the characters are designed and told is good. In addition, I would say that the plot is so unique which is also good about this novel . keep the good work, author! I will support you until the very end and I would recommend this novel to my readers and friends, I am very curious to know more so keep updating more chapters.
The opening is really well written! It really draws you into the story! I've loved reading it so far and l'm looking forward to future updates. . Keep it up, author! 🎉🎉
Amazing work. Very descriptive. As Im reading it I can imagine the characters in my mind. keep up the good work author. .....................
I like how the female lead is a weapon contractor, and how the two male leads, one is an angel and the other is a demon. The plot is awesome,
I like the world background it's very descriptive and good! Writing quality is better than the most stories on WN. Character design and story development is good too! Keep up the good work!
As I've only gone so far in the story, I'm in quite a hurry to finish this review before I completely forget about it pfft. But to be more honest---I love the descriptions, the tale woven, the possibilities. The characters are so 3D, each with their own goal that makes this story complete pop out from the rest I've read! Continue the great work author!
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The writing quality is just beautiful, it makes one see better than reality, dreamy yet real. It's just right for me! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This book is my cup of tea with my favorite kind of story were the hero rescues the damsel. Love these kind of stories. Keep up with the good work author. Eagerly waiting for more.
Writing Quality: The writing is fantastic, it has a clear way of describing yet still encapsulating the meticulate detail of the scenes, expressions and actions. An excellent command of the language. There are a few minor grammatical mistakes but nothing too major that affects the reading itself. Stability of Updates: From the date of updates, it's fairly consistent. Much expectations on the continued consistency. Story Development: The story is still fairly new but there is a lot of potential in the story. Can't say much for now but the introduction already have a lot of interesting bits. Character Design: The characters are well defined right from the very start of the story, that is a wonderful thing. The characters have their own personality, maybe their personalities will get more complex later on in the story. The best written character which anyone could agree with me is Zerro. with his sass and sarcasm. A fun character to read! World Background: Hmm, the world background is currently still quite premature. If there are devils, will there be angels? Could Han be an angel? Maybe.
Good job author this story is fantastic.....................................................................................................
Very well made. Definitely worth giving a good try. I enjoy reading the protagonist, and the stories mystery, and romance aspects are really well made. I hope for this to be updated more and to eventually conclude in a nice way. Very good job, author!
Just by the cover i knew it will be amazing, my hunch was correct. This book is great, amazing. the writing (10/10), details (9/10) i loved the firts chapters [img=recommend]