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In TODAG World with Summoner's Rift System
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Just typical reincarnation to tales of demons and gods world. This is fanfiction and the true stories belong to Mad Snail, the author of Tales of demons and gods.
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4Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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I enjoy the story and concept there are only 2 real complaints ive developed so far(ch26) the mc is holding on to the original mc’s leg to hard and making it less enjoyable and the grammar took a sharp dive around this point to the point its sometimes confusing even with me being use to such things
No story is ever perfect for everyone. I feel this one was rushed. The system had almost no use other than gatcha and the shop. We see him allocating stats some times but other than that he’s supposedly killing tens of thousands of beasts for points. I skipped a bit towards the end wanting to avoid dates weddings etc for the story and it came to a dead stop without finishing it.. The ending was extremely rushed filled with non stop group cultivation batches but he wouldn’t do it for himself. I would have liked to see them finish here and to venture out into th multiverse.
This is the Author please don't bash me so hard and I'm shamelessly put 5 star for my novel. This my first time writing novel .so please give me a good review so I can update more and improve in my writing skill .