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In Naruto: Reborn as an Uchiha
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Ninjas are creatures that are born to fight. In the perilous ninja world, where the nations form factions, and under the pretext of expanding fair rights, the countries start using military force to expand their territories and start world wars.
With the choice of being reborn as an Uchiha with five perks, follow Izuna as he embarks on his journey to becoming a peerless existence.
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[A/N: First of all, this is my first time writing something, so please go easy on me.
Second of all, English isn't my first language so there could be the possibility of some grammatical mistakes, but I'll make sure to edit from time to time.
And if you have any suggestions or criticisms about the book, I'm all ears. There's always room for improvement, after all.
That's all.]
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The story has potential. And it improves chapter to chapter, so good luck with it and don't drop it. And, please clarify the POV, cause it confuses sometimes. Got nothing else to add, all in all, great start.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
The story looks like it has potential and I love it that there will be other point of views and not only cannon fights especially since the third war is to come. Keep it up
Writing quality is better than most of the stories on Webnovel. Though I am sad to say that is the only positive thing I can say about this story . Plot is extremely bland and disjointed with constantly changing PoVs that makes the reader wonder what is actually happening at the moment. I haven't seen enough of it to say more about the character design, though that says something about the story too. Just think of the setting as a very AU one with a peculiar Uchiha clan.
in my honest opinion, this story is kinda unrealistic... I mean the guy is 5 years old for God's sake. if u can do a time skip to at least make him older then it'll be understandable. but a 5 year old with Kate level chakra performing techniques that are overrated... those rasengan transformations were only possible for naruto due to sage mode and asura chakra but this MC....
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Hi everyone! The author here...!!. Guys, this is my first ever work and I am currently a college student. so as you can tell I am inexperienced. But, please guys do not criticize me for my blunders, and please help me in gaining experience in the comment box. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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5/5 for me. There are some comments about how the writing quality is bad, well, author edited it so it's clean now. About mc... If i were to describe him, he's just a normal naruto fan. Not some obsessed or cringe fan. He's also has the Uchiha vibes, well he's an Uchiha but you know what I'm talking about. The story development and pacing is good, actually. There are some small and big timeskips but it's not 'forced' because the author doesn't have anything to write. I actually like the timeskips tbh. The timeskips fits to summarize. Oh yeah, i also like the golden sharingan. At first I was reluctant to read it 'cause i like the red blood sharingan but when i think it through it's actually cool lol. The new villains too, for the mc. I like it. Well, overall, the author doesn't just write a' fanfic'. He used the narutoverse and is making it his. I can feel that he's thinking and planning things through.
This is one of the best naruto fan fic I have read. The story is really good and I love the mc. The only thing I don’t like about this novel is how short it is. I hope this novel doesn’t get cut short.
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Great story I'm really interested in what will happen in the future now that the timeline has changed a bit especially whether the uchiha massacre will still happen
Well, everything is edited now those things 1 month before are pretty much outdated so....................................................................................
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More.........more........ more...... more .......more .........more......I want more. Give me more, author. That aside,.the story is awesome.
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