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In Marvel with the Rinnegan
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Dude gets transported to the world of Marvel after using his wishes. Follow his journey to live his life to it's fullest and enjoy every moment.
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Loved it .............................................................................................................................................. NOW WHERE IS THE REST!
If you are looking to read something good, this is not for you. The mc is bad, not in the sense of his vision or personality, his build as a pj is bad. The narration is disastrous, it jumps from one side to another, the times are the same. The bottom of the world, as far as I have read, is not interesting.
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This fanfic is about a man who crossed over to Mcu in Yahiko's body, but the character's way of thinking is just stupid. I'm not exaggerating, the guy is so stupid and brainless that you can go crazy. The original Yahiko is a man with style in voice, posture and dignity. At least the author would know that since he has his body if not his memory and the idea of this fanfic is probably based on Mc liking him, right? I mean, you had 3 wishes at the beginning and you spent them all on rinnegan and a Yahiko body, there's no other explanation for this. Then why is your Mc acting and talking like an idiot and a newfound idiot?!?!? To think that you're actually having these conversations as Yahiko!!! And most important part is Mc has no purpose. He doesn't really have a purpose. All his focus is on canon like in every marvel fanfic. There's nothing wrong with that, but the fact that he's thinking of approaching Shield to stay close to the events? As if that wasn't enough, the idiot says he'll give it to his friends if he gets immortality in the second hour of his arrival in the universe? Dude, are you an idiot? Are you seriously an idiot? Are you giving away apples from the grocery store? It's f@#*#& immortality!!! Is it something to be given to people just because I'll be bored when I become immortal? The author must have exaggerated the wish fulfillment and thought about what I would do if I went to Marvel, so that an idiot with so many desires appeared.