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In Marvel with a Star Wars System
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After watching The Last Jedi, lifelong Star Wars fan Ethan declares "I don't love you anymore Star Wars!" Sharing his disappointment with his best friend they happen upon a mock-up of a Lambda class shuttle. Claiming to be a new immersive Star Wars video game, the two friends decide to play only to discover that the game isn't a game.
Now transferred to the Marvel Universe, the two friends discover they are embarking on an adventure. The MC is a Jedi Initiate while the primary supporting character is to be a Mandalorian bounty hunter!
Come along on the journey to become strong in the Force and explore the Marvel Universe!
**This is not a traditional system story. I hope to do a system story different from others I've seen. If you love traditional system novels, this won't be for you.
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The Author's Holocron
This fan fiction is meant to be superior to the machine translations of Chinese stories. It strives to have characters with EQs above an insecure child. Even better, my MC won't be an evil one-dimensional villain who somehow convinces the heroes of the Marvel universe that murdering is fine.
It will also avoid being a business school dissertation that involves becoming besties with Tony Stark. There won't be a business plan on how the MC will make billions of dollars, and then run off into space and realize all of the effort they put into creating a business could have been spent better by being a hero.
The story will also avoid spending eighty percent of its time running errands and dwelling on micro-explanations of how they are using some pseudo-scientific ideas to grow OP. In summary, I've written this story as something I want to read.
I plan to write it as long as I'm enjoying it, and I hope to share this adventure with others who are looking for something fun.
If you're someone who loves reading fun stories and wants to see how Star Wars and Marvel could interact, then keep reading!
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Honestly you need a better synopsis. It's hard to keep track of what's going on when there's no general idea of what the story actually is. Here's a gist for new readers. These two friends go out of a theater and are lured to play this VR game but in actuality they get transported to a star wars/marvel verse? Lots of star wars references/jokes. Not my cup of tea, especially the dual protagonists. Good luck!.
My problem whith the story is the synopsis is not the same that the story tell and the fact it not a system like traditional is the reason why I gave four stars but the writing is good so good luck whith your story it just not for me
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The story is a mess, very difficult to read, and the personality of the protagonists are terrible... Things you should know before reading: - It has two protagonists. - The world they are sent into is a simulation, so it will probably have the kind of horrible ending that simulation stories have.
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La historia no esta nada mal, aunque en mi opinion es mas adecuada para los que sean fanaticos de star wars, de otra forma resulta algo incomodo, por mi parte, dejo la historia, pero no esta nada mal para los que les gusta este tipo de historias
So far from what I’ve read you will see some errors with characters names being used when their not supposed to in the first 20 chapters maybe, some might be very annoyed with some grammar here and there However the author is quick to fix these things so do help him out when you spot them as to allow more readers to not be confused as the story progresses. Now I have yet to see Mc and other character pictures other than this fanfic cover so I’ll leave that alone, authors updates daily which is great though I would prefer longer chapters than short. I’ve seen quite a few people complain that they’re 2 MCs which is not true though it does seem that way, author has already addressed that in one of the reviews here and in comments. Other then this that’s all the issues I currently recall that me and other readers had issues with that I’ve seen.
OK sofar I have seen neither hide nor hair of any system. even tho it says system in the title. Just because an old man tells you to do something then gives rewards doesn't make him a system. Secondly people trying to reinvent the system genre annoy me. the system genre works because it is a nice "turn off your brain experience" also the MCs personality is soo out there and off the wall even jarjar would be annoyed. it also makes the story harder to follow and is not nearly as funny as author thinks it is.
Guys! Look at the Thor on the cover! Look at their faces! Look at MC's hairline! This is awesome! Dunno about the story though, It's too soon to tell but I'll change my review after a few more chapters to something more accurate.