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IN MARTIAL WORLD WITH PERSONAL SYSTEM
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Let's See What Will Happen when A Normal human with A Normal Life Experience Travel To Fantasy World With 3 Wishes from God
Lets See What Kind Of Thunderos Changes Can He Make AND What Kind of Fun He Will Bring to Us
Thus Is My First time Writeing A story So Please Bear it with Me
Intro OF Martial world :-
In the Realm of the Gods, countless legends fought over a mysterious cube. After the battle, it disappeared into the void. Lin Ming stumbles upon this mystery object and begins his journey to become a hero of the land
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HII GUYS THERE WILL BE NEW CHAPTERS OF COMING SOON AND THE STORY WILL START FROM SUNDAY OR MONDAY [img=update][img=update]HOPE U WILL LIKE IT
This is my First time Writeing story So guys give me some support with 4 to 5 stars [img=update][img=update][img=update] and thanks for reading I will try do my best to make it fun and entertaining so guys don't be angry and support me I
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The fan fictions is i the beginningn of the story so i don’t have much to say but the original novel is perfect i give it 10/10.
IF U GUYS HAVE ANY IDEA FOR IMPROVING MY FANFIC PLESE GIVE ME SOME SUGESSTIONS[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp]
Ehhh The same "random guy gets an op wishes for no reason" type of fanfic.
It's a good Fan-Fic but it will be very good if you just use some Grammar apps as i saw in(more than one time) the book grammar errors some missing words or not fully written words but overall its a good fic for time passing specially since the MC is so OP but no fighting scenes till now 😁😁😁
I am dropping it here man I will try to write new one because I was trying to mix to much of original novel trying to something but it isn't working any more [img=faceslap]
from here chapter 12 I don't need to cover the story I will not follow Main character plot are anything related to lin ming . I will start conquering theworld in dark[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] I don't have much knowledge for Chinese names so I will name my subordinates like shadow 1 etc
Guys Hope u Enjoy it But can u guys recomed me some bloodlines for sword axe archer spear users so that followers can also be strong AND ATLEST ONE BLOODLINE FO MC I CANT DIRECTLY GRANT THEM BLOODLINE BUT WITH THE POWER OF PUREFICATION SOME NORMAL DEMONS BLOODLINE CAN BE PURIFIED
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I wi update story every 2 to 3 days so stay turn and ready for new chapters It may be boring start but I will make it entertaining from 4 chapter it will be recarnation in New world
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