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In Douluo Dalu with the Naruto System
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When he woke up, Ye Zhiqiu found himself in Douluo Dalu's world, and he became Tang San’s neighbour and a young boy.
Ye Zhiqiu, who had originally thought that he could only hug Tang’s legs tightly, awakened his main martial arts spirit at the age of six, followed by the Naruto System.
Since then, he has gone farther and farther on the road to greatness.
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gonna give you 5 star for you translating it into better version... remember to keep releasing 5extra ch every new week so new people could see what you are translating..
I'm addicted to this one and Can't wait to see more of it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It’s a fun story, MC gets system point by provoking negative emotions in others, so he trolls people a lot. The system is integrated well, giving him abilites that fits with the world. So ninjutsu have to be a spirit ring ability, but physical abilities can be used without issue. The chapter are really short, because the translator is seperating them into two parts to increase chapter count. There are some words/ names that have not been translated right, like calling Madara as ‘master ban’ one time.
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I already read original story First 100 chapter very good chapter Very slow pace story and good story development But at ending story original author seems very rush to ending story Spoiler At Below MC become god at 13-14 year old only need 7 ring to become god MC has 6 harem Story about MC more become cultivation world Hhsjdusidjdhdhdjdmsmddhdhhwt eyyjyjfwjetbk vevjrutsdoydoyfjlfyodysxyixyodtixoycyodhovjpchocjgxutditditxyidtjxtdigdtistichodyidiydiyxiydydyodiydiydyodiydiydgidgidyitxxyhitigkdiydyiycyofhlchdhldyoyfyodyicyodyodoydyidiyxhoclhcyodohdoggidigdixihdgoxohdihihdkdigxigdkgxhkkhckhcihchgohxhchckhljhcohhc
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The writing quality is alright. Although some of the early chapters had a problem. Especially the spacing. Love the author and will support this fanfic! Still, shipping zhu zhuqing to the mc!
Good story so far~ need moreeeee[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The main character is very funny, especialy with the ways he irritates people. The grammar isn't the best but its understandable. Most of all, even though its excessively used, I just love the sharingan.
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well a good start. lets see where the story goes. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I've read till chapter 197 and I can only say this fanfic is just so so. The translation is not so great and every time the characters speak it is in broken English like they are immigrants who didn't learn the language. The plot and flow of the story itself is also not that good with plenty of plot holes and arcs that are a result of the MC st*pid decisions. There is also not romance (it is as if the MC have a girlfriend but also not) with nothing ever happening. The only nice thing in this fanfic is the system, I honestly quite liked the concept and the way it was executed.
You keep making mc use the Sharingan for trivial matters and because it shows a lot, it becomes boring and predictable. And provoking his enemies in a childish way like (what did you guys hear a dog barking) I also see as a viewer that MC does not have any privacy or ambiguity, which reminds you that MC is from another world and knows the future, which in turn gives you suspense and looking forward to the next as you spoil it more in the future You complicate things a lot Although it does not require that
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Yea... I think I'm gonna need more Duoluo Dalu FF... It was the first Chinese manhua I read... And God... It was so Good... So much nostalgia.
I really like this story good story Please update more. And the progression of the story is good, interesting to follow, amazing. I'll wait to follow up.
Decent. Would like to see more updates. fillerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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I am at chapter 17, its good so far, I am quite interested to see how the mc will gain power after leaving the village and weather he can get points from spirit beasts.
Well a shameless review by my side 😅😅😅. But don't be sad my friends, you can all join the legendary shameless group by asking me about all of your questions about this book.