/ 漫画同人 / In DC with probability manipulation
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this is my first attempt at writing fanfic, as English is not the first language I will try to learn and improve along the way.
MC lives with constant bad luck that plagued him. he tries to persevere at first but in the end, he gives up and becomes a shut-in. he spends his time lazing around on his computer reading comics, manga, and watching tv shows or movies.
in the end, he dies, and giving compensation from ROB he got his wish for probability manipulation power and many more.
Follow MC's journey in the DC universe as he tries to live his fullest in his second chance of living.
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GarudaTranslation Berpartisipasi 16 - JOKER_JAY Berpartisipasi 10
- Good_Loser_ Berpartisipasi 7
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- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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this ff does not look like a story but more like a diary of certain events of the protagonist, there are too many time jumps and little interaction both with the characters and how the story is developed, the good thing is that he used the wishes quite decently without getting too much nerf. the writing quality is ok just that I don't think this is a story because there are only some important events and we don't see any character growth, I hope the car improves or rewrites because personally it's not good, anyway for those who want a quick and easy reading where mc makes a dialogue a chapter is the right story. it is rare to find a dc story that is not abandoned I hope the car improves.
author here giving my self some boost , come give me some feedback and review. thank for reading my work....................................
Hope you will keep writing, i like the idea of the story will keep on reading to see where it will lead to.............. *******************