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What kind of changes would occur if a history enthusiast Reborn in Napoleonic France.? With his feet crushing the formidable British Royal Navy and his fists striking down the vast Russian Tsarist Empire, he would look across the world and boldly proclaim: "All of Europe basks in the glory of France."
Instead of saying the protagonist is Roland, who has traveled through time, it would be more accurate to say that the protagonist is Napoleon. Alternatively, the story has two protagonists, with Roland primarily providing support and assistance to Napoleon. Especially in the early stages, when the protagonist has just graduated from military school and is only a junior officer, he cannot influence the political or military situation.
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World building is good. The writing quality holds everything else back. there are no obvious errors though a character's name was changed from Charles to Charlie for a chapter inexplicably. The word choice is what holds it back there is good amount of either modern slang or having an educated character uses a statement like "enter war mode" to signal increasing the threat level in an area. I don't care about stability of updates as a metric, it only matters to this site so they can judge income expectations from chapter unlocks.
Honnêtement il y a plusieurs erreurs historiques par exemple la bataille de Turin historiquement n'existe pas. Aussi je peux reprocher que le personnage principal est pas assez développé au mieux la moitié de l'histoire le concerne et on a pas l'impression qu'il s'engage sérieusement à changer l'histoire jusqu'à ce qu'il transmette les plans du fusil. Bon après je dis pas que c'est une mauvaise histoire mais je crois que le protagoniste devrait être plus développé et plus investis dans les événements.
Looking forward to the follow-up。。。。。。。。。。