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Immortal Domination : White Emperor
4.2 (14 peringkat)
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"Reincarnation, that aspect of a living being starting a new life in a different physical body or form. All this has always sounded like just any other religious doctrine or fairy tale to me" Smiling wryly, Xǔ yún(John) stares at the evening sky. "with this second chance I must fight to survive and not be trampled on a second time, even if it means becoming the Devil!!".
John was the typical example of the saying 'from Grace to Grass'. after the untimely death of his parents, he was tricked by his relatives into leaving his family fortune and forced to run away. He somehow ends up in the slums of England, however with his weak personality and Body it was easier for people to Oppress and control him.Till the day he died nothing ever seemed to go well for him, even his Online character "Kane" on the Age of Wushu MMORPG had a better life than him!.
But all that changed after his death as he is reborn with a system on Yǒnghéng Continent as the Xu family young master.
Read on to Discover how John forges his path as Xǔ yún towards becoming a God.
This is a story with a few ideas and names from an MMORPG I played during my college days placed within my own original World.
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Power 
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4.2
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WQ - 5star since for me your skill in writing is good, basically I always give 5 star to every author who's talent in writing is more than me since I'm trash in writing. SU - Update release is better than me so 5star again, hopefully you will stay like thay for your reader. SD - Story is .... well since the plot is so cliches, if I was you I'll write the system using emergency method to absorb poison into MC's body and change MC constitutes into that poison or yin body. this worsened when you kill his father but reaction from MC is quite lacking since MC saying himself that he didn't even know them enough to feel close. how will he feel close if they died early lol?~ so 3star CD - almost same with above, since I read him being jerk like that when his father death and he just ' ah father, too bad we didn't that close and my feeling for my parents is almost non-existent and only guilt feeling left he has for his parents. lastly he's hiding his true ability so its 3 star since this is overused method. I know it since he want to be stronger first before being open that he's strong but that poison should prevent him being able to cultivate but he's clearly telling them he can cultivate but he's hiding his real power to a girl that want to protect him!~ if I was him, I'll tell her my real power so she can be at ease and I'll tell her not to have mindset protecting me since she would be target of his enemy later. WB - not much but since I'm being biased on 2 category into 3 star, so I'll give this 4star to make my overall review into 4 star!!~ since myself is author always get harsh critic so I know how you feel if the review giver is being too much jerk!~ Suggestions, later if you make another novel!~ don't use overused plot and cliches, since so many people will drop it midway!~ make your own style so your novel will be unique!~
Hello! My fellow Daoists, Author here. I've been advised by beggar Li to shamelessly rate my novel. Meanwhile, I'd like to use this chance to thank you all for your support!!!
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. 😎😎
The plot is as cliche as possible. As elsewhere, mother mc was poisoned and dies during childbirth. And everyone considers mc to be garbage, they despise it everywhere, there is a girl who is the only one in the clan who cares about him. Born in the lowest world. I did not even try to read further.
I really like the story so keep up the great work _____________________________________________________________________________________________&__&&_____
The story is just greate. Greate world building, character design and development of the story. Although the chapter update is a little strange.
I was surprised when I found a fanfiction based on age of wushu Really loved that game. Still does somehow but it's been a while since I stopped playing it. Nice fanfic idea tho keep going pls you are doing great
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Power system to complicated you need to print it out and look at it every time someone’s stage is mentioned and compare. ruins the whole book
Amazing novel from characters to the plot background and progression. Personaly I advocate for the author to continue with the novel as it is just not fair for an awesome work to be introduced then discontinued, that in itself is a crime. Authur, please continue the novel.🥺🥺🥺🥺
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An enjoyable story. Looking forward to more chapters. If I were to be critical of anything it would be the odd capitalizations in the middle of sentences and the lack of capitalization of Bie He’s given name. However, you’ve got a great story here.
Hahahaha the story is pretty awesome but it lacks a bit of something but in time I'm sure author_san will figure it out so I rated 5 out of 5 for future preparations so please don't disappoinment me.
I like the storyline and the MC i recommended this novel to my friends and they like it but the novel is drop or not is still unknown i hope the author still can continue this novel and if it drop please tell the reader because when author drop the novel and not tell the reader that make the reader have high hope an make the reader always wait