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I Reincarnated as a Pokemon
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*English isnt my first Language so there will probably be a few Spelling errors here and there*
My Name's jack 17 years old i lived a pretty Ordinary Live. average Grades in school. i had friends and Loving. Until the day that changed everything....
it Was a day like any other i was in the Mall with my friends Then suddendly i heard screams and shots the last thing i felt was a sharp pain in my head before everything Faded to Black....
when i regained Conscience i was in a Black abyss i couldnt feel anything then there shined a blinding light and in Front of me stood......
*This is my first novel pls dont expect too much from me :D Btw in this universe pokemon didnt exist. i will try to keep the chapters at least 500 words long.*
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From the start when your reading it you can see the quality of the writing itd not bad but it's not good it could use some more work, and how we got off of how the MC became a pokemon was weak you start off with mc introducing himself than later his best friend then goes to the mall and dies that needs more detail into it, suddenly right after the MC dies he meets a God without any explanation then sends him to pokemon world, and more into it obviously I'm not going into this very much I'm just telling off. [ for the author ] this is by no means disrespect this story is better than most of stories please don't get angry in all I was just saying it needs improvement but not major, other tham that have a good day🙂
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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Shameless self Review this is my first attempt at writing a novel if u guys have any Suggestions pls do let me know if i actually decide to keep writing this for a long time i might make a discord Server or smth like that^^