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Not bad!!! Really liked it though you repeat a lot of things during segs and even copy pasted a few big paragraphs when they took MC For the first time.... Lets see how it goes
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hey this is pretty good a spelling error here and there but nothing to bad keep it up!
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Great story I hope you keep it up most authors drop kuroinu stories within 10 chapters I hope you are not one of them