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Traveled through the ninja world and became a civilian ninja in Konoha Village. After learning about the cruelty of the ninja world,

Awakening Simplified System,

[Simplified Chakra Practice: Breathe! 】

From now on breathing increases Chakra!

[Simplified mental strength training method: sit quietly! 】

From then on, as long as you sit, you can increase your mental strength!

【,,,】

With more and more simplified skills,

The ability that others have cultivated for several years, Liu Yun only needs a short time to cultivate successfully!

and! will become stronger!

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Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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Daoistov8HHo

The story is ok but the translation is bad

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Ikaru5

Read it at your own risk. If you’re someone who understands English this story will give you an headache. But if you’re not a native speaker go ahead maybe you can even enjoy it, but just maybe

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ExoticSenta

Didnt read it, just came to say: [Simplified Impregnation: Handholding!]

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DaoistE8ByZe

dogshit chinese

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Lizrock

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DaoistjqgeAo

I dont know how but you managed to make mtl chinese generic novels into shakespere's work with this novel of yours. Like bro what am I even reading? You should've let the AI do the work and even then it would turn out to be something readable.

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Dracon_Flag_Bearer

The writing quality is going downhill from chapter 1.

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Alex_Kelian

The idea itself has potential but the actual execution is terrible, my advice is for whoever wrote this is to see how storys and novels are written and try learning from them at least .

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LastGod

This is NOT english if u are going to write a story in english do better my eyes watered trying to read this absolute trash.

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ZxeroX
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Great concept ! But the grammer is horrible . I feel like he copy and past it from somewhere else . Since it randomly say advertisement throughout the chapter.

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Daoist_Empereur

Just bad the story could be better but you see the translation and the fact that this is a copy past and the author don’t even say that this is a translation

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You may want to have someone edit this. You have a good story, but your sentences are hard to read. Ut's like, u did a slap and paste for the translation.

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Daoist5RvI4q

I personally enjoyed it so far it a cool concept

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Mauricio_Goes

Not bad waiting for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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