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Honkai Star Rail:The Assistant director
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Ritsuka Fujimaru. Last master of Chaldea and Destroyer of Worlds. The boy who saved humanity several times to become the enemy of several civilizations, some were innocent, others were not. He holds these titles while being just a simple human with no talent as a mage. Unfortunately, he has an enormous talent for attracting dangerous beings who are interested in discovering how a mere human can defy his own destiny and death several times and emerge victorious. It is because of this bad luck that the boy has that he was dragged to participate in an adventure that goes beyond the stars of his universe. This is the story of his journey from a simple delivery boy (assistant director) to the Herta space station.
This story takes place after the events of Ordeal Call 2. So if you feel that Ritsuka is very serious, it's because he just came back from the real world and said goodbye to the Avengers. Another thing, this is my first story that I'm writing in this app (especially in a foreign language) so expect dramatic errors, since I'm using a translator to write.
(The old title was the Errand Boy)
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Love the slow development of ritsuka fujimaru and the character of honkai star rail who interact with him especially their expression and their reaction when they hear his insane and out of pocket adventure of his. All way get me laughing. also stelle is here may I need to say more? All in all it good fate×hsr fanfic
I so glad this exists. I love both FGO and Honkai. It's a great start please continue this.
I've only read about 5 chapters of the novel so this might not be as accurate to the whole novel as a whole, but I still want to talk about some things about the novel. About the novel, the novel has an interesting premise, with Fujimaru being in HSR with abilities related to him being the Humanity's last master, but the novel have major things that are concerning to say the least. One of the thing that i'm concern of is how there's no clear as to what is Ritsuka's personality here, because in some moment he is flirting like it's nothing, and then he gave some deep sentences to Bronya, (which is also a major concern that's i'm going to talk about after this) although this might just be a problem with how fast the pacing is and the timeskips the author does, but still pretty offputting to see him act erratically. The next is how he just gives out information about his past, which some info are PTSD worthy, casually. In just a few chapters he gave the fact that he d*ed and has been close to dy*ng multiple times, have given info about the Lostbelts, specifically LB1, just to use to compare it Jarilo VI. Next is how the characters just casually ignored the fact that Ritsuka confirmed erasing the Lostbelts, along with its residents. Yes, they were surprised, but never brought it up, but it can be chalked up to them being chased by Bronya and the guards. Overall the novel is pretty close to being a crack!fic. I'm going to read till chap 15 or 20 and decide if this is really for me. PS. Author, I suggest reading Railroaded by Solbook, it's here in WN too, it's got some great ways to deal with an MC with conflicting ideals and past, and the Characters being fleshed out is grest too
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Great start but Gudao's way of speaking is not the same the way he speaks in FGO.