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Heavenly Learning System
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'WHAT THE FU*K WHAT HAPPENED TO ME' A boy with a frail body said
'WHAT HAPPENING WHO IS THIS " RAY WISE " AHHH WHAT'S HAPPENING' The boy shouted with all of his power then a sound was heard in his head
[Ding]
[Found A Suitable Host]
[Initializing HEAVENLY LEARNING SYSTEM]
[Connecting with host soul]
[Connection established]
''WHAT IS THIS SYSTEM AM I REALLY TRANSMIGRATED LIKE MANGA AND NOVEL OH YEAHHHHHHHHH'' Ray said
This was the cheat given to the transmigrated Boy
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This Is My First Time So Ingnore Some Grammatical Mistakes,etc
You will enjoy it so Let's gooooooooo
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Penggemar
Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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He has given a good outline but he should give his charater info more let's see what will happen next but I will suggest you to read it once
You should upload some info about the world also you are writing only story about how the character is growing but you should add some part where we can know about the world our main character lives in