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To love a werewolf is bestiality they say, but then they go and say that love has no bounds.
I've seen love in its truest form, in every form, I've seen it all. And I know it's something I'll never be able to feel for I've learned not to feel since so long ago.
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Only the first chapter but the phrasing is a little rough. Gave a five and stability unless otherwise shown later...as only first chapter it leaves quite a few questions about the MC and the world around them. You don't know if it is modern or historical or fantasy world. It is a very vague chapter that I might conclude as a prologue or extended synopsis. As chapters progress may change rating.
Well i really got confused in between felt the book was somewhat evasive in understanding but i must commend the author your writing skills are on point and hope to see a less complicated novel by you Anyway i Loved the book.
The story wasn’t what I thought it would be based on the synopsis, but I enjoyed reading it anyway. The story left me with many questions though, it was one confusing thing to read.
What? This ending didn't make sense at all.... It seemed like the author didn't know what to do with the story he/she developted and just ended it anyway. At fist it developted pretty well and the character was good too, but then started to happen things out of the blue with no explanation. Maybe it would be better if the author focus in only one story until it finish.... Because he/she got clomptetely lost in this one : (
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Interesting short story. There's no real romance closure, but the author did a good job in the emotions that the characters expressed making this novel touching. I love the characters, but I just wish that we were able to have a little bit more backstory on the last pureblood vampyr. He just kinda suddenly appeared in the end. Though I am kinda happy that he only came at the end. I'm personally not too fond of the love ******** dramas. Plus it seems with the mc's character, she would kinda just act as if it was no big deal that someone was following her (that isn't the ml) I really like the author's story. Hopefully she/he can make another novel that is longer and planned.
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I still don't know how to describe it.. but from the 1st to current chapter... Now I can get a little sync to this novel... can't wait for the next more chapter.. where the MC finally discover her love...
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Synopsis is like a mystery that makes one curious.A pretty good 1st chap to increase the interest to continue reading. Make it a little less confusing & then it's good to go...